just read it all in the last few hours and loved it very good work with a great story line. other than a few spelling mistakes and small parts probably once ever 5 to 6 chapters that look like small part is missing its wonderful. and one of my top 10 fics that are not finished. p.s. I'm not good at spelling and grammar and or punctuation. p.p.s. if the story keeps being even half as good it 100% got top 25 storys that are finished for me. top 10 if it stays the same I'd have to say sadly 10 or 11th place but dont feel discouraged its still wonderful.

A fucking year and there is nothing of romance, only a few small indications, and since I no longer find it enjoyable, it is nothing more than I review it and look for interesting things and if not, why bother to read it.

It would be good if you already told who is the main pairing and who is in harem, it is not worth being that I have wasted my time reading something that will never happen, because recently I was following a story that according to was NaruErza and at the last it turns out that it was Minerva, just a waste of my time.

so the year is X787, 7 years before Lucy would join Fairy Tail? And yet, the 7 year timeskip takes place in 791, Lucy joins the guild in 784.

And in your next chapter, you open up with a 7 year timeskip and whoop-de-doo, the year is 784.

It's weird how you manage to misspell X777.

may you do aftermath next

That's a bit much...

Female Mystogan?

I read these last two chapters of bullfight, and boy were they entertaining. The way the Shukaku pulls Naruto out of Freed's barrier was a very good idea, even more so for the raccoon to rub it in the face of Zorro.

I really want to see the battle of Naruto vs Laxus, see if you will be a battle of two Wizards Vlase S with the same Elements (Lightning), or two Wizards Opposite (Wind vs. Lightning).

Good luck and Ja-Ne.

His nickname could be Oberon the Fairy King like Erza is Titania the Fairy Queen

Holy shit dude do you know what what commas are dude? Find yourself a beta or at least reread your chapters before posting them and see how hard is to read this shit.

happy anniversary hope you doing well

Great chapter , please update the story naruto x Rwby ( Naruto Rose the Champion of Light) next time

I think it would kind of be difficult for Freed to prevent Naruto from using Hiraishin no Jutsu, especially if he can use Reverse Summoning, as they are technically the same thing. Hiraishin no Jutsu and Summoning in general are both Jikukan Ninjutsu or Time-Space Ninja Techniques, meaning Naruto is technically riding the time-space continuum. Before a lot of new translations and the Narutopedia were changed over, it was actually stated that both Hiraishin and Summoning work by the user literally going back mere seconds in time to a point of anchoring (a Hiraishin Kunai for the Hiraishin and the Summoner in Summoning), which is why both techniques seem instantaneous. This is also how Minato improved the Hiraishin from what Tobirama created and also why he was called Yellow Flash because it made him create after images of himself.

This means Freed would one, have to know that Naruto's technique is actually time-space manipulation, not dimensional manipulation like most teleportations (for example Nightcrawler's BAMFing from X-Men, he actually travels through Hell, another dimension, which has a different flow of time, whereas Minato uses the actual Time-Space Continuum). Secondly Freed would need to know how to write runes and create a jutsu shiki (technique formula or rune barrier), that specifically effects how Naruto uses the time-space continuum (he would need to know Naruto is actually traveling a couple of seconds into the past rather than just appearing elsewhere). The chances of Freed even knowing Hiraishin is a Time-Space Jutsu is rare, but him knowing how to use runes against Time-Space Techniques would be even more doubtful, if he had that level of skill, his barriers would have been impenetrable to the Alvarez Empire.

Also I agree with your assessment of Laxus power compared to Erza, though the proof of Laxus' overwhelming power was evident as far back as the Tartaros Arc. He defeated Tempester in one move during their initial confrontation and the only reason he had trouble in his second confrontation was literally because he was being eaten alive by the Bane Particles. Had he not been poisoned, Laxus probably would have crushed Tempester as easily the second time as he did the first time, but you see more of his overwhelming power in the Alvarez Empire arc, he ANNIHILATED Wall in the blink of an eye with his Red Lightning. Like you said Laxus was S-Class WITHOUT using his Dragon Slaying Powers, and no telling how long he had been holding back on the Red Lightning, plus every time you've seen Laxus fight, he doesn't really fight, he just stands there look'n Boss while completely stomping his enemies, keep in mind he defeated Jura, one of the Ten Wizard Saints, bitch slapped Raven Tail out of his way, and went toe-to-toe with a Dragon, simply put, dude's a certified BAD-ASS! Even if Natsu is the hero of the story, Natsu defeated Acnologia through the combination of everyone's powers, including Laxus', and both Laxus and Cobra were the only ones to land powerful hits on Acnologia on their own, both knocking him through crystal structures, so even if Natsu was the hero, if he or Erza tried fighting Laxus, they would get stomped into the ground.

On that note, I hope you redeem Laxus. I can care less about the rest of the Thunder Legion (though Bickslowe and Freed were pretty bad-ass in the Tenrou Island Arc, but Evergreen is just a slut on the side for Elfman to get a girl), but Laxus was a freaking bad-ass in the series with a knack for entrances. His entrance in the fight against Hades was one of the most awesome scenes of the entire series, his run in with Org from Sabertooth was classic with Laxus standing there with his arms crossed like 'What? Bitch.', to him taking on Tempester and Wall made him a bad-ass, especially when he took on Wall and entered the fight with a bolt of crashing thunder that made everyone stop, look at the town, and go "Well, there goes Laxus", so yeah, he needs to be redeemed. Only comparison to Laxus' dramatics was Natsu's "Messing with Fairy Tail was the biggest mistake you ever made" before kicking Gajeel's ass. Only thing I didn't like about Laxus was when he tried to attack Levy, could have cared less if he beat Jet and Droy's sorry asses, since technically, they were jokes, they wouldn't have even gotten so thoroughly thrashed by Gajeel had they been paying attention to their surroundings instead of gushing over Levy. But Laxus attacking Levy was his only drawback... she's like Wendy and Sherria, she's too damn adorable to hurt, and any Levy-haters can go...

Hahaha, holy shit, is he actually known as the Mage of the People? Does that mean he can unironically do the People's Elbow? Finally, my wrestling terms will come into play!

Not surprised he's a bit more brutal here, this situation's kinda tense compared to the usual fare... sucks for the whole 'hiding how strong he is' bit, but oh well. Questions will come later most likely.

Chill dude, you don't HAVE to do this chapters quickly just do them at your own pace, do what feels right and fuck the trolls if they talk shit, that's the only thing they do. You could burnout or stop caring about your fics if you keep pushing yourself too far.
Good chapter, wish that they would be longer but that's it.

Peace

Oh it's alright. you have much time as you needs.*smiles" Really? *baffled face* I thought you're good at battle scenes! it's really good and I enjoyed it and never thought it's too long. *thinking face* ... Naruto's officially pissed off...I actually pity Laxus and the Thunder Legion for triggered his anger. Evergreen BE GONE THOT! Geez I have to admit that their loyal to Laxus is admiration but sadly that's not enough. Great chapter