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Good to see Will being chill with Andis one night stand and future one night stands. More technodjinn mayhem.

Good chapter, and good references to gundam. So chell, I use parts of the sasabi, quebelly, I think of Freedom too and others that I don't remember

i absolutely love your take on godhood, can't wait for the sequel!

Nitpicks:

1) "Heck, if Hera hadn't banned him from it, he'd probably already made himself a whole harem of moe catgirls." : "...he'd probably already have made himself a whole harem of moe catgirls."

2) "Will said as he tentatively ran a hand through the little harpy goddess' hair, causing the girl to flap her arm at him to ward him away and pressed herself deeper into her mother's arms to get comfy again." : "...and press herself deeper into her mother's arms..."

3) ""So, um, dare I ask how were they conceived?" : ""So, um, dare I ask how were they conceived?""

4) ""...Gods are a lot different from mortals and one big difference is that you all essentially live many mortal lives at once, since you all are one with their domains. ..."" : ""...since you all are one with your domains. ...""

5) "The god of love had just disappeared when there was a knock on the door of the room's closed door." : "The god of love had just disappeared when there was a knock on the room's closed door."

6) "Wendy chimed in with a mental chuckle, having clearly guessed at the content of Andi's telepathic conversation with Mr, D from the direction of her thoughts. " : "...Mr. D..."

7) ""I've got a mission to go on, so I want you to go fetch Katie and Ida from my palace to fetch my daughters."" : ""I've got a mission to go on, so I want you to go fetch Katie and Ida from my palace and have them pick up my daughters.""

8) "Busy dealing with its new floral parasite, Chell was forced to abandon delivering the killing blow thus allowing Andi to slip out of her grasp to regroup." : "Busy dealing with her new floral parasite, Chell was forced to abandon delivering the killing blow thus allowing Andi to slip out of her grasp to regroup."

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LMAO! Andi is never going to be able to live this down. XD

Cool chapter continue please.

Nitpicks:

1) "Though it conveniently did not hinder her movement at all as she demonstrated when she teleported close to lash out at Alabaster with her claws." : "Though it conveniently did not hinder her movement at all as she demonstrated when she teleported close to Alabaster and lashed out with her claws."

2) "His spell thankfully dischanted Lamia's field spell once more, but it had taken its toll, leaving him looking winded as he struggled to keep his sword up." : "His spell thankfully dispelled Lamia's field spell once more..."

Awesomeness

Welp that happened to Katie, yes girl that's your life now. :)

Nothing to nitpick this chapter as far as I can tell. Good job!

Can I just say that this is probably one of my top 5 chapters in this Book? It was incredibly fun to both write an read.

Cool chapter continue please.

Awesomeness please continue

Omg. Loved the new chapters. Amazing. Update soon please