If you noticed the authors writing style, the girl almost always initatiates, or in one case flat out sexually adults Ash. Only in one instance did Ash make the first move.

Kinda disappointing he wasn’t with Serena. That woulda made for an amazing scene instead of having to skip and skim through half of it waiting/hoping he was gonna put a stop to it.

Why is there so much miette here? Also, ash should have just stopped her, if he actually likes Serena and wants to give her his first kiss or whatever, he also should have just given her his first time too...Mitte was asked several times to stop, that wasn’t consent either.

Thank you, this is amazing, I loved a summer in heat, and mother’s intimate loyal faith as well, write more of these where Ash goes at it with Misty, May, or Dawn!

An even better idea would be for you to keep the Champions Revived Glory plot mostly intact, but make it as dirty as this

I must admit I'm not a fan of the sexual assault present in this chapter. Please give warning in the future.

That's all. Other than that, good book so far.

Update 1 more chapter please

Could you do something about Serena wedding night and Ash impreganting her?

Or Ash bachelor party? In that party Serena would let him fuck everyone he can

Or Serena letting Ash fuck her mother Grace for some reason?

Your tag is wrong Serena/Sarina is an eventual character of the anime. She is a professor. The kalos girl is tagged simply as"Serena". Correct your

I like your Pokemon stories if you can put another story but with Ash-Misty-May-Dawn-Serena and if you can put a Digimon story with Tai-Mimi-Sora please yes.

Great chapter as always, hoping for another chapter with Serena and/or Aria. Keep up the good work, looking foward for the next one!

Another great, enjoyable story! So glad you decided to continue making these kinds of stories in between working on your other one. If you ever do a story like this for Sinnoh, I really do hope you include Cynthia as a part (if not the main part) of it.

I really liked the way you wrote both Ash, Serena and their relationship, and it would be cool if you did another fic with them, dosen’t even have to be a lemon just w continuation would be cool

When ash Gose to the unova region please add these girls to ashs hearm Rosa Hilda (these two especially Rosa we never really see in ashs hearm or even paired up with him at all these days especially Rosa she's even rarer paring since theirs only like a few where ash and her are in the same story paired together no one these days even really bothers to give Rosa a chance to pair her with ash so I'm hoping when a story is made where ash Gose to the unova region that these two do end up with ash they definitely deserve it in my opinion especially Rosa) gerogia iris skyla bianca (unova) and Carlita (Pokemon black and white movie) as u can see I selected ones that we don't really see here on the fanfiction website that often or none at all I picked them so they can get their chance to shine in ashs future hearm when a story is made for ash to go to the unova region that's similar to this story u made here

Once you go Ash you're hooked on him.

Can you do the sinnoh region next have the girls be dawn lyra Angie vierty(Pokemon I choose you movie and she also has a piplup like dawn dose since she's also from the sinnoh region) Candice and Zoey those are my picks when ash Gose to the sinnoh region