I can’t take this misty blush blush ect ect cliche shit without cringying. It’s a good story but the eye roll is real dude.

Keep posting man. Its gettin good and im excited to see where this goes. I would really enjoy if the OC went to some places in the show to go catch some of the stuff ash missed put on. The OC has all the knowledge possible and would know the best spots to hunt for prime pokemon according to the show and games.

MORE MORE MORE

Fantastic can't wait for more but should definitely upload on Webnovel you'd get a lot of hits and it'd be easier to follow but regardless GREAT READ

Why the sudden change in perspective? I really liked the first person

kinda wish he'd go off on his own again, the fix was a lot more original when he was going off on his own, reminded me a bit of the pokemon games, only meeting with Ash to kick his ass, as a rival should.

oh well, either way solid fix so far, looking forward to future chapters.

Should have tossed a ball at Meowth simply for the reaction of everyone there especially since he doesn't actually have a ball and is technically wild

Awesome

good chapter and story so far mate a rather satisfying finish to that prick of a trainer good work

I really love your story and think your a great writer. I always had wished for a fanfic like this where the person will pseudo-go along with ash and his crew. Your an amazing writer and the ideas in your story is awesome to me so please keep up the splendid work. PLEASSSSEEEEEE KEEP POSTING!

didn't he said he played the Pokemon game ? how he didn't know that Pokemon natures have different status increase and decreased and like different types of food

I really don't understand d his reasoning of no using type advantage

so this is the cliche story where the mc become ash little bitch and go wit him everywhere and become a side character

Thank you for putting Dameon in his place.

I’m really enjoying this story! Keep up the good work!