That was a fun story, if a little straightforward.

Nice work

Holy shit, that ending. Osborn be a mean dude, I am already scared for lil Peter!

I really liked this story, and especially for bringing in the Defenders. I haven't come across a lot of those; wouldn't have minded some more screentime for them. Where was Jessica though? Getting drunk?

I am glad you kept the teenager angst to the minimum, while still reminding the readers that that is what Peter still is.

You haven't planned any Peter with Mystic Arts stories by ant chance? X)

Harley may not have made much of an impact to you, but he deserves better than the sack of crap life Harry got.

So I'd say keep Harry as James Franco. As to General Kenobi or the McConaughsance, They'd both be wasted on Norman.

I mean both could handle the sleaze, but both are far too likable, you need a character actor who oozes hate for Norman.

Ronny Cox was too old for the role to begin with, but someone like him. Oh Snap! John de Lancie!

I found this fic EXTREMELY enjoyable, and I'm glad I found it this Saturday night.

Oh my god this is so much better than Peter working at the Bugle, and Ned gets an upgrade from Guy in the chair to "Investigative reporter pal of the SPIDERINO!"

Dang, you got the snark, you got the action, you got the new paths, you're an extremely skilled author!

BRAWL YOUNG PARKER, BRAWL!

You write these kinetic scenes so well! You also don't drag it out like a certain blockbuster did. The fight starts and ends exactly where you wanted it to. That's an economy I respect.

I kinda like that Pete quit the Avengers? Like when Tony was all mean to them, they kind of all deserved it?

Maybe I'm still a little bitter about CW. That was a hell of a movie.

I remember the old BEST-MAN webcomics, where BEST-MAN (actually Spider-Man) beat diabetic criminals with bags of sugar while laughing at them.

Plus, Spidey always had a mouth on him. Nice to think someone would use that instead of the eternally morose parker.

Speaking of angst fics, I've yet to see any that have Pete freak out about all the dudes he killed in endgame, Instant-Kill mode works exactly like it says it does.

Your Snark is just top friggin' tier.

I tried to work out if the 5 year gap would allow JJ to be a classmate of Peter's like in the comics, but then I remembered all the 1998 crap in her room. Bubble iMac!
Oh well.

Hi, I just found your story and I am impressed with how logically it flows from the movies and MCU character development. Yay to finally bringing the Avengers and Defenders together!

If you continue, I am curious how you go your own post-Endgame. X-men? Goblin?

Thanks for the story.
Rick

This story was amazing. Don’t give up on it please. I literally just binge read it. It really is great. I do have work in a few hours though... but this was definitely worth my time.

I do like how at times Colleen and Peter’s banter flow well together and how Peter gave her the name Ivory Fist. I do like how Peter calls Colleen Ivory Fist, since its similar to Iron Fist but different. I do like how Colleen calls Misty after Peter leaves, to call Luke Cage and Matt Murdock to back up Spider man. I do like how Peter makes sure that Aunt May knows he’s OK and what he’s doing next. Keep up the great work CadenceIX, till next time!

The scene where Karen says Peter should get support and his reply saying she’s all the support he needs was heartwarming. I am glad you brought back Answer as one of Peter’s super villains. Great job writing the fight scenes between Spider man, Answer and Collen Wing, it was well written. I do like that Steve realizes that he messed up on handling Peter and has failed Tony. Keep up the great work CadenceIX, till next time!

I love the scene where Bruce says “Is he cheating on us with other vigilantes?” I do love how the older Avengers give their reasons on why they did not call Peter for the mission but each one Peter gives a great counter argument against their reasons and is able to make some of the older Avengers understand his POV and agree with him. I do like how Wanda and Rhodey were able to see the very reasonable logic behind why Peter is piss off at the other Avengers and agree with him.
I do like the scene where Peter and Karen have “deep” conversion, that scene really makes me think Karen is the type of AI that can grow and evolve to be more human like over time. I do like the fact you have brought the main villain fro Spider man in this story are villains of his that are interesting but have not really been used in decades. Keep up the great work CadenceIX, till next time!