| Reviews for It's Cold (And hard to hide a teenager form a group of superheros) |
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   theotheroverlander chapter 1 . 5/2 This was hilarious! I love it! |
| KingCat48 chapter 1 . 1/23 tony saying such a friendly greeting when his so pissed is so funny n scary at the same time. XD |
| Belbelanne chapter 9 . 8/30/2019 Love the pizza challenge line. |
| BigYikesMarvel chapter 9 . 8/28/2019 "WhAt'S uP gAmErS" made me genuinely laugh dljflajsbjdkbsjkabdk Peter talks like I do in real life lmao I love the way you write him! Looking forward to the next update! (also loving the lowkey stucky) |
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/27/2019 Something I will say is that the timeline for this story is very confusing. It's kinda jumbled and the other characters being involved (like Steve, Bucky, Natasha, Thor) messes with it even more and takes away from the main story. Peter waking up falls flat because there's not enough buildup and honestly? I didn't think it would come all at once. He has one(?) episode where he's half awake and moving around and then suddenly he's up and running. Idk, but just so you know there are no stakes and the storyline kind of jumps all over the place. Sometimes words are just... gone in the middle of a sentence? You have skills as a writer, you definitely have the ability to write, just giving some constructive criticism hopefully you don't delete this review lol |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 9 . 8/27/2019 I think Peter might win the food competition because of his genes and being a teen. |
| upwiththebirds33 chapter 8 . 8/11/2019 MaGiC GoOgLe DoCs this is an awesome chapter! i love bucky and loki |
| sofiarose613 chapter 8 . 8/11/2019 Can't wait for more! |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 7 . 8/1/2019 I am glad Peter is awake... |
| DESPERATE FAN chapter 7 . 7/30/2019 YAY! SHURI, PETER AND LOKI BONDING! |
| sofiarose613 chapter 7 . 7/30/2019 Can't wait for more! |
| upwiththebirds33 chapter 6 . 7/27/2019 this is super great! also cheezits yum |
| Phoenix Moon 00 chapter 3 . 7/27/2019 You really need to reupload chapter three. I had to take extra time to read through the coded text of this chapter. I noticed multiple people asked you to do so and to always reread your chapters so that you can see where people’s names or actions are missing, but as far as I can tell there have been no changes. I thoroughly enjoy this story but not many get to when you have so many errors and then they come across a chapter of code. Many people would just exit out of the story and that isn’t fair to you. You need to look into ways to fix this. |
| BigYikesMarvel chapter 6 . 7/25/2019 I'm loving this story so far! :))) |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 6 . 7/24/2019 At least he have the Parkers that talk to him. So... Peter is awake. |
