*sorry for the late review*

i look forword to your rewrite of your Story Keep it up. a Bit of advice, while it didn't happened in this story, I've seen many game fanfiction, that try to hard to cram in all game mechanics in theire storys, and that hurts the story. an example for pokemon would be the outside use of HM's and the gym badge system for them, pokemon that can fly and are big enough to carry a person should be able to do so, and a pokemon should listen/disobey to it's trainer because of the relationship between them and not the amount of badges they have.

sorry for review.

PLEASE update! It's such a great story! I understand the writers block, but the plot is basically a comig of age story! I LOVE coming of age stories! And you're basically on of the only people to do a ROtBTD Pokemon story! Even if it doesn't flow well, take heart: It will get better. Please update?

I really like the Dragon/Pokemon choices...They were obviously well thought out, and they make sense!

hey, Acecove!
Great Story! I was hoping for a TROBTD and Pokemon story! So, Kudos! Also: Maybe you could do a Yu-Gi-Oh style battle:They call it duels. You say, 'Let's Duel!' or something like that. Theres a scoreboard, and if your (idk, battler?) gets hit, then YOU get hit as well...it's kinda confusing. Thank you for trying to stay clean! M rated fanfics just kill me. This is a GREAT start! PLEASE UPDATE!

if you want some inspiration for your pokemon battles I would suggest you watch the pokemon origins anime, ist the shortest complete pokemon series4 episodes 20 min each) or watch a few battle complimations on YouTube (I would suggest black white or xy anime)

I look forward to your rewrite, can't wait

nice chapter again, But your fighting scenes could use some work though. is there a particular reason why they were doing double battles or is it just customary there like in Orrethe region from colluseum and XD)?

congratulations you are the first author who writes a regular rotbtd pokémon AU story who manages to make the big four meet. liked the chapter, still a question about the truly wilds, are they like the other rational forms only on steroids or something else?

Interesting, very interesting! I'm curious who the stout man is - Sandman? I'm also really looking forward to reading the next chapter and learning more about our favourites in this universe. I like that they all seem to have been chosen by Legendaries - and I'm curious to see where that will take them. Nice work, and may the muses be with you!

I honestly think Hiccup should've at least been 13.
An the time frame of when this story takesplace is confusing. It's advanced enough to have pokeballs, but still not enough to have proper studies of pokemon? And have mystical powers? Now Aura is a different story.

A very interesting start.

good writing, liked the chapter.

so Emma's first pokémon is a greninja huh. nice choose but giving a beginner a fully evolved pokemon l, that's something I didn't expect. why not a froakie? nice chapter keep going

I think I must look like a broken record
good writing again. nothing else to say, for me that is.
nice work

nice chapter again, you got the characters on point, keep it up, this could be the first big four classic pokemon au where the writhe actually gets to the point where the four meet (I say classic pokemon because there 2 mistery dungeon aus of the big four where the author got to that point)

came just to my thoughts, how about making Elior a veteran pokemon contestant/coordinator (I don't know if thease are the right English terms I mean one of those pokemon beauty contest queens) and trying to get Merida into it