looks good here

could be good to see what kind of changes will occur with this one small moment

Word of advice. When you write a story, then write a story. Don't write out a script to an episode. Having to see things like "camera pans up", "screen fades to black", or the description of a title card is VERY distracting.

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is this a single pairing story or a harem? I would very much prefer a single pairing between Danny and ember

D'oh! Why did Dash had to force Danny into such a deal?! He deserves a good choking in Homer Simpson's style for that!

Yeah, in loving your writing format and inclusion of ember, i do hope you keep going at this epic pace.

Ember sure is being a good addition to Danny's team, much to Sam's chagrin, it will be interesting to see where this is going.

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I really like where this Is going.

Ahh nice update seeing how she is helping him now

Please update your story soon!

so much potential, and so many outcomes... it'd be a shame not to continue

Make it a three shot
U got the beginning now start with a middle and than an end.
Second shot can be the dynamics of Danny and Sam being out of whack and that Danny felt more with ember when he kissed her instead the fake out make out with Sam .

It's such a pity the producers didn't make that kiss between Danny & Ember happen, because it'd be much better than canon, seriously! Are You sure You're planning to continue it?
If so, then good luck.