Hello all well. I loved your story,

That aide sounds like a cow, hope they get fired. This is an amazing ending, can't wait to read the sequel!

your love for your mother is clear through the support and help you give her, over time the arguments will die down as you remember the life you two have spent together if you ever need to talk were all here for you. this chapter is amazing keep up the good work.

What a great story! I can’t wait to read what happens next!

ACK! Be still my thumping heart! I thought this story was going to be over and there wouldn't be anything more to look forward to, and now I see it's going to be continued! That was a shock, a pleasant one, but still a shock!

So, who is the mystery woman that will have Reid's baby? Will he meet her in the sequel? I've gone back and checked the hair-colour of all the females mentioned in this story, and none have brownish-blonde hair, so I'm assuming it's somebody we haven't been introduced to yet. "Come find me?" Hmmm.

Wow, the de-aging serum brought both Reid and Meirong back from death? Without anybody doing anything to activate it? Whoa!

And crikey, Thea just stuns both Morgan and JJ? And now Reid and Rossi and Meirong are going on a road trip in a '69 Camaro, chased by both Travers, a cult, and maybe even the FBI as well. Sounds like fun! *grabs popcorn* Okay, I'm ready for the sequel!

I'm so glad you had fun writing this story, because I had fun reading it.

I understand what you mean about your mother not being used to computers. I should have thought of that - my own mother is the same way. I hope you get a better, more mindful aide. Still praying!

I hope that Spencer will be ok- I have to admit that it would be kind of cool if he was stuck as a little kid for awhile- not forever just for a while- great chapter!

As for aides, yes, it's always better to treat them nicely so that they reciprocate, but there are some things you just don't have to tolerate. I hope things get better for you and your mom, and of course I'm still praying.

I can't help wondering why your mother isn't reading along with the rest of us, if she really wants to read the story. Does she have eye problems? It's so good that you recognize that you both love each other, even when you get on each other's nerves and fight over trivialities.

I hate trolls, too. I always try to say something uplifting when I write. Sometimes I even let myself get carried away by my enthusiasm for a story.

Whoa, so Hartman's been compromised, too? Never saw that coming! Or that he would commit suicide rather than divulge his source, or let the operation go down.

Yup, Thea sounds just like her dad. And she's right that she would not fit into the FBI. I loved how all three of them showed up with various devices that would make Q envious. And I just spent time looking up Celtic names that mean "bright one," but as you said, there's no student there by that name ... although hang on a minute, you mentioned somebody else earlier in the story whose name is not Celtic but can also mean "bright one" ... whoa! I've got to do some more re-reading here.

I like how Thea put up an act of being selfish, even though she really wasn't. I also like how I never expected Cunningham to be involved. Cunningham? More like Cunning Plan! And I'll just bet she wants to get back at Thea for all that subordination.

Meirong! NO! But I didn't expect anything less from Reid. And of course he would think about his mother at such a time.

Eagerly looking forward to more! Even though I'm sad that this story is coming to an end. *lower lip trembles*

Hi.
I know that I have not reviewed in quite a while but like you I have an addiction to my household. My mother in law has had some serious medical problems and can no longer live alone and we had to take her drivers license too. . It was decided that she would do best here with us. So can completely understand what you are going through. Arranging home health and sitters is insane.
I am loving this new story. But I enjoy all of your stories. You are the only one of my favorites writing right now. So I am rereading all your stories right now so I have something good to read. Keep up the great work. You and your family are in my prayers.

that woman shouldn't be an aid if she acts like that. we're here if you need to talk.

Great chapter! I am praying for you and your family.

I'd have been annoyed with that aide, too, not just for being late and not apologising, but especially about the phone. Sounds like you've got every reason to be stressed and frustrated, so I'm glad you got that pep talk. I'll bet it helped. Still praying.

Nobody wants to be Ron? I suppose they all think they're Hermione, then, lol. So, Orson was a pervert, but that wasn't why he was blackmailed? Interesting about the son.

Wow, Travers has really rewarded Reid for saving Thea's life, but I'm fairly sure Thea wouldn't have listened to Reid if she hadn't already been keeping an eye on him. And Thea seems ready for anything - she'd be another good one to have in the FBI.

Nice detail with the payphone number.

My neighbor had the same problem with an aide. She called the supervisor of the company and the aide was replaced. Know that you are in my prayers. I have been in your shoes. It will get better.
Th story is getting intetesting. Love it.

I'm glad they found that message in the safe and I can't wait for more

Well- I didn’t see that one coming- great chapter!

I don't know about you, but I personally hate it when people are late. Even if I know they can't help it, I still start foaming at the mouth - or at least wanting to. And driving in the city is no fun, either. I'm still praying for you and your mom!

Thea speaks Chinese well enough to identify local accents? Wow, she must have practically grown up bi-lingual.

Loved the part where every member of the team was amazed and astounded that twelve-year-old Reid had a girlfriend. And the kiss made him gag? Because he doesn't like kissing, because he doesn't like Meirong enough to kiss her, because he doesn't like girls, or because he feels like some kind of pedophile inside, even though Meirong is also de-aged? I'm not sure all those antacids are good for him, either, but at least he's physically safe.

Uh oh, I'll bet somebody blackmailed Tanner to get him to sabotage the ropes. It sounds like somebody was after Thea, but the other girls got in the way. And now Thea knows the truth about Reid. Sounds like she's been suspicious of him all along, checking up and keeping an eye out.