Guest reviewers suck ass. I'm sure their coming from the same person who ships Lincoln with Luna and prides themselves on killing Sam. Fuckin weirdos lol

People that say homophobic remarks just want something to complain about. They're nothing but a bunch of losers who can't seem to even remember the definition of the word 'fandom'. Ships like these exist only for the sake of existing and it's fun to do, if they like to hate stuff like that then they need to take their remarks somewhere else.

I thought this story was great and even though Luan x Maggie will never be canon I thought it was cute. You made a great story and I also don't like the whole 'Loudcest' stories yet I'm not complaining either.

In regards to your Addendum, I say well said. Most "guest" reviewers don't realize that it's the authors reasoning to determine whether or not it should be allowed.

First, great story, beautiful character interactions. Second, thank goodness someone is finally calling these bigots out. Honestly though I’m 90% convinced that the homophobic Guest are just 1 person who keeps posting multiple times to make it seem like there are more people who support them as opposed to the single sad individual they are. I’ve seen them in the review section of pretty much every story in this archive with gay characters, and their frequent enough that I’m certain they are going out of their way to find them just so they can say hateful things about them. So good on you for finally just saying it. These losers need to go back to FourChan.

I thought It was A Great Story And Scared to put names To comments If Don't like It Why Read it Sheesh

To be honest, I had a idea with a bit of this. That bit is of the two ships have the same relevancy.
Anyways, that is a very good story.

I can't stand Homophobs either; they're are nobodies, in my humble opinion.

Anytime I see a "Guest" review that contains statements that have little next to nothing to do with MY work, I just up and delete their reviews. My advice, only pay attention to the reviews that matter; those that provide honest critiques about your work as well as opinions

Personally loved this and I’m sorry people are being insensitive jerks about it.

It might not be canon but whatever consenting people get up to is their business so long as no one gets hurt.

In order to express my thoughts fully on this story, I must divide them into separate parts.

1. THIS WAS AWESOME! Not only is LunaxSam one of my favorite ships in the series. But this is one of the best stories where their relationship truly felt authentic and heartwarming.

2. I'm also a mad supporter of LGBTQ pride, even though I'm straight. No matter what the haters proclaim, their love is just as beautiful as "normal" (or straight) romances. They not only experience the same joys the rest of us do, they also endure everything else; stresses, insecurities, doubts etc. So, some "normal people" have no right to alienate them or treat them like they're committing a crime.

3. In terms of Luna and Sam's relationship, I haven't seen a couple so beautiful and deeply in love with one another since Ruby and Sapphire from Steven Universe.

Finally, I can't really say much about the Luan x Maggie ship because unlike Luna with Sam or herself with Benny; Maggie hasn't really had much screentime. As such, I can't really give my thoughts on what her character's like or if she's a better match for Luan than Benny is.

In closing, this was a wonderful story; one that I am immediately going to add to my favorites. Keep up the great work and best of luck to you on your next story

Insanely adorable, heartwarming, and uplifting. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!

Pretty vanilla story, don't know what happened in this years motor city pride parade but nothing happened in the story.

Absolutely loved this. You have a knack for writing cute yet endearing stories.

good job keep up the good work

Wow, that was really moving. Sweet and funny, but powerful in its messaging.