Good job

Tenten is a definite sincere sweetie. She was so underused in the manga.

Hmm, damn would love to see this become more than a one-shot anyways keep up the great work!

Kushina would approve of Tenten.

You know..its been debated since it was revealed how the uchihas are susceptible to their emotions more than others that the Sharingan leaks chemicals into the brain when its being higher the sharingan,the more unstable it makes the person. This would explain why Sasuke is near emotionless when his eyes are black,but rage spewing when his sharingan is active. Shari-Rennigan seems to have fixxed that chemical leakage problem however and Naruto pounding sense into sasuke seems to have cleared up the rest of the remaining brain chemicals allowing him to get his head on straight in canon.

I normally don't write reviews but I have to say this story was excellent

nice work loved reading it

This was good. Really sweet and a realistic portrayal of what may have happened if Naruto got sasuke back before the war. Feels like it should be a two-shot instead of one-shot though. Feels like we are missing an epilogue.