| Reviews for Metalmancer |
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   Antianti12 chapter 1 . 9/15 Stopped right when the villagers were trying to lynch him, such a dumb cliche. |
| Percy Jackson7 chapter 14 . 8/10 Wow what a fight! And the new blade, I don't blame him not wanting to use it all the time. Blade that you don't want people knowing about. That's for sure. |
| Shifter chapter 14 . 8/6 Really great story continue as soon as possible please and have Naruto gain a summoning contract soon along with the eternal mangekyou sharingan and then eventually rinnegan |
| Shifter chapter 14 . 8/2 Great story continue as soon as possible please looking forward to seeing what happens next chapter |
| biob1 chapter 13 . 7/23 Good work |
| biob1 chapter 12 . 7/23 If anyone says anything about him using vmclones just ignore them |
| Shifter chapter 13 . 7/15 Really great story continue as soon as possible please looking forward to seeing what happens next chapter |
| Immortal Potatoe chapter 13 . 7/16 Epic story. Well written. Good job |
| Rickjames196 chapter 3 . 5/3 haha odin got reckt He got lucky he didn't run into pein. Why'd you change akisame's name tho I was like... err |
| Rickjames196 chapter 2 . 5/3 Sweet so he has all of kyuubi. This should have been canon, ugh he was such a weak-ass. Well I guess if he was op from the beginning there wouldn't be as many Naruto fics... |
| Rickjames196 chapter 1 . 5/3 Ahhh that was a beautiful ending |
| lara5170 chapter 12 . 4/29 This is interesting and I'm looking forward to reading more |
| lara5170 chapter 11 . 4/29 I am sorry but I have never understood this pairing. I have always considered her nothing more than a side character with little to no purpose |
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/26 or, you know, smarty pants, he doesn't have to mooch dipshit, he could LITERALLY just send shadowclones or shinbunshin across the fire country to do metalworking jobs, and it's not like banks dont exist in the naruto universe, like gtfo outta here. "he cant find work in the village blah blah blah" nigga if you're gonna break them up have it be real and not over some bullshit that's easily worked around when you have skills like naruto does in this fic. Goddamn i wish you dipshit writers would quit making stupid ass decisions like this that make almost 0 sense. Maybe write your characters with a little more common sense and less emo retardation bullshit |
| Shifter chapter 12 . 4/26 Really great story looking forward to seeing what happens next with Naruto's sharingan and relationships continue as soon as possible please |
