it's kinda sad that you seem to focus all your creativity into ways to side line Rose, just so you don't have to put any real effort into the bigger story. this is the second movie you basically copied word for word. that is real low effort. You can't make a character "the strongest magic user on the planet" and then only use her for some non-relevant dialogue. If you write a story where you can cut out one major character and nothing changes in the plot, you've done something wrong. It is indeed sad, because you are not that bad at writing, though since you copied more or less everything from the screenwriters it's hard to say where your own talent actually starts. I've read A LOT of OP Harry Potter / Marvel crossovers and the good ones always take Harry's presence into account and build a diverging story line from there. It's the butterfly effect, if you change a detail you have to write the consequences as well.

Why is OC so pathetic and not escaping with magic?

Shit fic same as canon except OC takes pepper's place as hostage lmao

well done. Your writing really improved over the time.

Rose in MMM: OP af

Rose in XTREMIS: useless af

Pathetic, she shouldn’t need to be at full strength to apparate away! She’s just a useless, pathetic, damsel in distress!

I am not the greatest fan of Captain America but how Rose behaved the last two times she interacted with Steve was rude. How she had no communication with him for eight months after him asking about her mother and then calling after that time to apologize and then again rudely hang up on him after only speaking a few words with him and from him. She could have ended that call, that she instigated after eight months, in a better way than hanging up on him mid sentence.
If it was me and someone felt that they needed to apologize to me about something but waited eight months to do so then hang up on me, without explaining why they were apologizing, I would be thinking if I wanted to hear from that person ever again.

Bouncing off someone else you could have a one shot with Clint and Rose pranking the Avengers and Fury.

Maybe you could do a one shot for each holiday. If not, you could do a prank war or April fools day thing. I’m good with plot ideas if you want more.

Loved it can’t wait for more please update soon

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

well this is different and i like it.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Loved it please update soon

I can’t wait to read more! It’s very interesting!