More Serenity

interesting. serenity really doesn't see enough action, looking forward to this

Serenity definitely deserves to have someone I am glad to see her pair up with Naruto.

good story so far. can't wait to read more. keep up the good work

Very good chapter.

The MCU memes are strong in this fanfic

This may not mean all too much coming from a random like me, but after reading through ALL your stories and author's notes and seeing the downward spiral your thoughts were taking recently, I feel I need to say something. Not just to you, but also as a very sternly-worded message to your detractors.

Fuck 'em.

Fuck each and every single one of their lazy, snarky, impossible-to-please punk asses.

You're creating too much Naruto content? Remind me HOW many fanfics exist for that series already? How many times its lore has evolved & changed, causing budding writers to gain new and creative ideas as to how things could be different?

Making too many Fate-related stories? Again, how many paths are there to take, how many variations of damn near EVERY. SINGLE. NAMED. CHARACTER exist throughout its branching multiverse? As in, the NON-fanfic multiverse? Is it so wrong to want to explore it a bit and maybe even throw in a nice bit of chaos? It's not as though unexpected arrivals and shit always completely hitting the fan in the most mind-bendingly insane ways are hallmarks of the series or anything...oh wait, they ARE.

And I might be in the minority, but I honestly enjoy the Beast!Naruto character. A lot, actually. But I can't see exactly how people can complain about it showing up so often when its original appearance specifically made it out to be a dimensional-traveling monstrosity who's STATED GOAL is to annihilate every Naruto within the multiverse it can sink its claws into. On top of that, it's also clearly a far cry from being a "villain sue" thanks to the incarnations which are a wee bit out of its weight class. Puts a great big smile on my face every damn time.

But let me return to the point. These pissants who constantly bash your fics are not the writer. YOU are. They are not the ones who created these tales. YOU are. They did not take lord knows however much time is necessary to not only come up with the ideas, but type them out. YOU did.

Seeing you crank out chapters day after day has inspired me to resume my own fics, after a literal 3-YEAR hiatus. You single-handedly renewed my interest in creating fanfiction. And I can no longer sit idly by and watch as these outlandish, mudslinging blowhards bash and break you down piece by piece.

I made sure this review is as long as it is in the hopes that you, them, and all my fellow supporters of Neon fanfiction can bear witness and take notice. That the constant and consistent instances of flaming, hate, and trolling are not and never will be appreciated, wanted, nor warranted. It is pathetic, it is juvenile, and I refuse to stay silent over it any longer. If they don't like what they're reading, they can kindly fuck off and let those who ARE enjoying the myriad of tales you bring do so without the droning negativity they seem hell-bent on carrying along with them.

In the meantime, you do whatever the hell you want and take solace in knowing there is and ALWAYS will be people who absolutely adore your work.

Write on, Neon.

I wonder who the Caster is, yet I feel like it’s Medea

Great chapter. These two are adorable together. Also, this Naruto shows exactly how you should think if you want to win a Grail War. With a plan and strategization you can use any class and win a Grail War. Please keep up the great work and ignore all the haters and flamers they are just jealous of your talent.

Serenity is adorable. I can’t wait for her to show her stuff.

Wonder what would happen when beast meets this one?

Will the beast just *chomp* ur ded or would they fight for a long ass time?

Este capítulo ha sido hermoso, con ese momento tan adorable, lástima que terminara siendo un harem, opinión hubiese sido mejor que sólo fueran ellos dos, pero tampoco me quejo

This is amazing and I hope you update this soon! I love serenity in this .

I really like this story keept up

I am happy with this chapter and I'm a little sad I forgot about this part of your story until now.