Very cute story! Thank you for sharing

Darm. Would've Love To See The Guild's And Her Reaction When They Would've Reached. Would She Find Out He's "Salmander?" And Would He And The Guild Keep The String Ordeal A Secret?

This is a really cute story. I loved that you used a Juvia/
Mirajane mishap in the beginning, and the Fate’s red connection strings. In a way, they definitely were meant to be. Thank you for your work.

Honestly, you should totally continue this. It’s different from how most stories here tend to go so it was refreshing to see a different take on how they meet. Make a story out of it!

Loved this! Hope there’s a chapter 3!

Loving this already !

This was nice. Not gonna I’m curious to see more of them but if this is the ending then it isn’t a bad one. She escaped and is off with Natsu :)

Great chapter.

Love the end, I wonder when Natsu will tell her that she is his other half.

Glad you decided to continue you it. Is this the last chapter or will there be more?

Hi there,
Your humour shines throughout the story. The whole mishap with the love spell and the scene at the train station. They are well written and fun to read.
I can just imagine Lucy waking up the next day and screaming her head off before giving the sleeping intruder a Lucy kick. In any case, it was a fun story. Hope that you decide to continue. Thank you for your work.

I am very curious about Lucy's reaction lol

I agree with the rest of the comments it can’t end lik this It’s toooo freakin cute pls continue !Dx

aww wwww... that was so fudging adorable. And I kinda wanted more? For it's too good to just end like that. Though I'm really excited for what's more to come.

Awe! This is so stinking cute!