| Reviews for Unworthy |
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Guest chapter 4 . 10/20/2019 This story was SO amazing! Great characterization and so well written! Can't wait to check out your other work! Thanks for sharing. |
Uia chapter 4 . 10/7/2019 super cute moment...glad you updated |
PrimaImperatrix chapter 1 . 9/3/2019 I really loved this story, especially the first chapter. The dialogue so felt natural and very true to their characters, which is no easy feat, so kudos. I adored the Hakim and Aladdin banter during training. I'm sad this was such a short story, but I really enjoyed it while it lasted. I hope you write more Aladdin fic in the future. I'm gonna need something besides Tumblr feeds to keep me going until Aladdin 2. |
Uia chapter 3 . 7/30/2019 super cute |
Luiz4200 chapter 3 . 7/26/2019 Well, Aladdin needs something to use his time for so, why not doing something useful for the Kingdom? |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/26/2019 This story is amazing! Please make Jasmine and Aladdin have a happy ending with a beautiful family and a blissful and prosperous life... You're an incredible writer, by the way. This story is really heart-warming and cute |
Prizz chapter 2 . 7/10/2019 I loved it! Insecurities playing part on both of them. I just hope they manage to overcome it together. |
Brower chapter 2 . 7/5/2019 Wow, when I watched the movie I saw everything in pink, a happy ending but I didn’t notice this Aladdin’s perspective, I like your fic |
Camie chapter 2 . 7/5/2019 Ever since I've seen the live action movie, I've been obsessed with Mena's Aladdin and Naomi's Jasmine' relationship. And you certainly did it justice! You truly seem to understand the characters and their dynamics! It's so interesting to explore that ''after the end'' story cause I too believe that they would have those kind of concerns : Aladdin believing he's not worthy and Jasmine overtrying to rebuild her city and too busy to see that Aladdin struggles too! Can't wait to read the end! Hopefully you have a lot of fluff in store for us, those two deserve a sweet moment! Beautiful story :) |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/2/2019 I nearly cried at the ending of this chapter; you broke my heart! I can’t wait to read more |
Paragirl-Jane chapter 2 . 7/1/2019 This is amazing! I was waiting so much for a good story after the movie. This just made my day, please don’t stop after three chapters :D |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/1/2019 I felt secondhand guilt for Jasmine here. Ugh. Anyway, wonderful chapter! |
LightNote19 chapter 1 . 6/25/2019 This is great! Love Aladdin’s character moments along with Jasmine. Love the quiet moments between the two. Love Aladdin’s angst! Love the plot of him being King. Love the romance! Love that you keep Aladdin’s ‘thief’ ways’ like he’s more wise about the world verses Jasmines innocence. I hope you go more into all of it. Can’t wait for the next chapter! |
Peacockgirl chapter 1 . 6/24/2019 This is a great start. Is there more? |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2019 This was incredible! You have a real talent for writing and I hope you continue |