| Reviews for Mortals meet the god Perseus |
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  pig man chapter 27 . 7/29 Fuck pussy nigger! That's how you think like a real black-skin? you're going to prostrate and beg to your mighty masters and kiss our foot like stray dog Trying to beg to got a house. Your mind is full of insects. Good, I can feel your lust. I am defenseless. Take your weapon. Strike me down with all of your lust and your journey towards the bitch side will be complete! |
 HedgiePen chapter 8 . 7/24 No no no no no no I tried to read because it was a complete FanFiction with a sequel but this is hard to read without cringing. I’m sure some people like it and I apologize for the flames. |
| HedgiePen chapter 6 . 7/24 WHAT I’m sorry I can’t complain more about the other chapter so I do it here. Sally is younger. younger. Also that is not how ADHD works in any way shape or form. Believe me. There is NO purpose for the guardians. Also by even going to sally Percy is interfering even more because he is actually going to spend non romantic time with a mortal. If Percy’s a God he has to act like a god. |
| HedgiePen chapter 5 . 7/24 Gotta be honest I think the “guardians” are un necessary. A better word would be highly armed hooligans. Sally is eighty she can’t join. Also I turn my back on the company of mortals. That’s like I turn my back on the company of men. Only worse. May I also point out that sally is a mortal and that she lived with mortals her whole life. And I suppose they are immortal too. If you read Greek mythology Percy can either be an Olympian. Or a minor minor god with a group of followers. It drains 75 percent of power. Notice how Artemis doesn’t have as much raw power. It’s a good story but you’re gilding the Lilly. |
| HedgiePen chapter 3 . 7/24 I love the story but it ain’t K it’s definitely T |
| InsertRandomUncreativeNameHere chapter 27 . 7/2 Can you do one with Throne of Glass? |
| InsertRandomUncreativeNameHere chapter 25 . 7/2 Fifty meters in three minutes is slow as crap. Average fifty meter time in the 13-15 age division is between 28 and 35 seconds. |
| loulloko chapter 27 . 5/18 overall 4/10 |
| Zero chapter 3 . 5/4 OHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOO ! |
| Zero chapter 2 . 5/4 Come at me bro ! |
| Zero chapter 1 . 5/4 DAM. |
| Joe Lawyer chapter 27 . 5/5 Fun little story! I enjoyed it. It did a lot of different things that I hadn't seen before. |
| dragonslayer111 chapter 6 . 4/20 this is a repeated chapter you have two chapters five |
| daru mona chapter 28 . 2/5 I enjoyed these all chapters |
| JasonGraceforeve chapter 28 . 1/24 OMG This is great! I love the Avatar reference at the beginning of the chapter! |
