I liked it. It was not the most active of chapters but it was interesting. If berserker does go into adult form I wonder what she would look like?
Looking forward to the next chapter hope it comes soon

This too good, I love Penth and I wanna see more of her, I need to see more of this story

You are having WAYYYY too much fun writing her. You know I could honestly see it playing out with Achilles and her literally Freezing in place...Naruto calmly walking up behind Achilles and saying quietly, "Word of advise, dont move. Dont breath, dont twitch, and for the love of all that's holy dont say a word...or the chibi will strike." Hilarity ensues when Achilles does all 3...but I'm betting you have something as good or much better planned.

Great chapter. You always find the best alternate servants to create the most interesting interactions. Please keep up the great work and make sure to take care of yourself and ignore all the flamers they wouldn't know hard work and good story telling if it bit them in the ass.

good

You’re a most absolute load of shit that needs to fucking die.

Well, that was quite amusing but who was Lancer was it Jeanne or Arturius.

Imagine starting yet another Naruto story when you can't even finish Die Another Day. You're a fucking joke. Delete all your garbage from this website and fuck off. Fucking bitch.

Love this to death

Best servent back story ever man love this one

A most especially load of shit is what a disgusting STD loving fuck boy deserves to be treated like. Now would you kindly go fucking kill yourself.

Please tell me that's not Grand Lancer...

Damn, and here I was thinking I could go without seeing Rome himself for a week or two. I suppose it's not the worst choice, though. A question, if you would. Will we be seeing the Dioscuri at some point? Castor and Pollux are just too wholesome.

Anyway, wonderful work as always.

Thanks for the support! The site seems to be working again~!

I vote for you to fucking die like the disgusting STD loving Gary Stu fuck bitch you are.

I don't understand what Lancer is complaining about.
You have no honor? She came with the intention of killing Ruler, the Servant summoned by the Grail.
Fiends? Coming from an Alter that means a lot.
She thought she was fighting Knights, her mistake.