Reviews for Arpeggio of Orange Steel Revised
EarlSilver chapter 3 . 6/27
Good, I look forward to moar!
kage88 chapter 3 . 4/10
can not await for more
kage88 chapter 2 . 4/10
good one
kage88 chapter 1 . 4/10
I'm happy that someone has taken the challangr
Daniel Smith Jr chapter 3 . 9/5/2019
when is your next chapter?
Olaf74 chapter 3 . 8/9/2019
I absoultely LIKE it.
narutouzumaki9718 chapter 3 . 8/5/2019
This is a great story so far!
Mario brothers chapter 3 . 6/28/2019
I loved the chapter, it was very fun. Thank you very much for your great work, may God bless you.
Zero chapter 3 . 6/27/2019
This actually pretty good do not worry so much about the small mistakes, the plot is still in progress but I can already see that this has great potential do not give up and update soon!
Yamato: kancolle appearance/ Musashi: Arpeggio of blue steel appearance/ Enterprise: Azur lane.
Roze the Shining Shadow Knight chapter 3 . 6/28/2019
I want to continue reading even more.
I have some questions to ask, I hope you do not mind answering.
1) What would you call the naruto fleet?
2) Do you have plans for Naruto to build his own nation on an island, like the Uzumaki clan?
3) Will other characters, such as gunzou and company or others, participate in the story?
4) Will you follow the history of the canon with naruto on one side or will you make an original fic in which the story will be different because there is a new player in it, where their actions will cause the plot to deviate from the canon's events? ?

NarutoXTakaoXAtagoXMusashi is the only thing I ask, otherwise, although I would like a bigger harem, everything depends on what the writer wants, that's what your story is for.
By the way, Hyuuga has a mental model, you can check it on the arpeggio wiki.
ExoChaos chapter 1 . 6/26/2019
To: Generations of the dark dream
Do not worry, nothing happens
Graugt chapter 1 . 6/26/2019
Hi, I'm Mexican and I've read your story, but when I went to copy the translator's text, I got the review from the guy below, who should have copied me, and without looking I put musashi. It does not matter here my review goes.

I want to see how it goes, thank you very much. xD

musashi (arpeggio)
Graugt chapter 3 . 6/26/2019
I love seeing that there is a new crossover with naruto. I've been waiting a lot, so I hope you do not leave it.
Do you have any plans in the future to upload some naruto and kancolle fic? I am afraid that, like here, there are few fic, and they are abandoned.
Iona will be paired with gunzou?

Pairing: shoukaku (kancolle), kashima (kancolle), colorado (azur lane), st louis (azur lane), atago (arpeggio), nachi (arpeggio), I-402 (arpeggio) and musashi (arpeggio)
ExoChaos chapter 3 . 6/26/2019
I love seeing that there is a new crossover with naruto. I've been waiting a lot, so I hope you do not leave it.
Do you have any plans in the future to upload some naruto and kancolle fic? I am afraid that, like here, there are few fic, and they are abandoned.
Iona will be paired with gunzou?

Pairing: shoukaku (kancolle), kashima (kancolle), colorado (azur lane), st louis (azur lane), atago (arpeggio), nachi (arpeggio) and I-402 (arpeggio)
Smiling Guy chapter 3 . 6/24/2019
I liked the chapter, but it is certainly short, it has left me wanting more.
Could it be possible that you could be a little more descriptive with Naruto's Super Battleship? In chapter 1, Bismarck believes that he is a yamato class, so he must have three triple-barreled frontal cannons and two triple-barreled rear cannons, right? because I've seen some models of the izumo class.
I would appreciate it if you gave specifications.

I loved the interaction between Naruto and the Daichi, it made me laugh.

For the question of chapter 2, under my personal preferences, I prefer to be called admiral.

I would like to see some flashback about how he met takao, and the others. And also that you will explore more about Naruto's mental state, he has been betrayed and stabbed by his best friend, his sensei abandoned him without caring that he was Minato's son. I would like to deepen more on the subject, I would like to see how that affects their decisions, their way of acting, after that, I imagine that he will have become more closed about himself, if Kakashi left him, who says that hinata, a partner with which he barely speaks and knows will not betray him?

In conclusion, I liked it but it left me wanting more. Hinata's flashback has occupied everything, not that I complain about that, but I would have liked to see more of Naruto.

For the harem, I like it big, I mean, it has passed all his childhood like shit, and even if he has managed to move forward, with a determination and strength that many others lack. For me, he deserves a lot of love, he has had many interests: Amaru, Shion, Shizuka, Sara, Sasame, Koyuki, Toki, Ryuzetsu. For me, Hinata more than loving him, admires him, since I help him as a child, he has the hero's typical admiration, and they have not given the poor enough time to explore his feelings about Naruto.

In short, I will soon have to go to study training and career guidance, for the harem, I have seen the comments and I can not help but agree with them, I am a man who has a lot of love :) but I do not want it to be gigantic, like others who put 20 or 50, because then there is no character development, only sex toys for the prota.

Kancolle: Suzuya, Suzutsuki, Yamakaze, Hamakaze, I-19, Hatsuharu, Tatsuta and Isuzu.

Goodbye good sir, and please, in the next chapter answers better, say that you think about what they say, make some joke to the reviewers, I've seen that although few, you have great reviews, not as in others that you They say "Good chapter, keep it up" and now, be more fond of those who give you good reviews.
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