| Reviews for Heaven's Descent |
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Kevin J Rosario Cruz chapter 1 . 4/19 So all the hype just so he would still be slave but instead of the Greyjoy now he is a slave for the Lannister. To think I actually expected this to be a good story man what a disappointment this turned out to be. |
miguelgiuliano.co chapter 2 . 4/13 Interesante historia espero con ansias por el próximo capitulo. Supongo que primero veremos a Myrcella siendo comprometida con Naruto. Espero que Myrcella sea mayor que Joffrey en tu historia y que sea hija verdadera de Robert, así Naruto tendría posibilidades de hacer un reclamo por el trono de Hierro. Espero que luego esta historia de vuelva harén. |
giz99mo chapter 3 . 4/5 Thank you for writing this i hope you write more. |
Lt Juan Rico chapter 3 . 1/23 This is a very interesting fic, well written and engaging. Lookong forward to future updates |
emoryjmorrill chapter 3 . 12/24/2019 Niceeeee |
miguelgiuliano.co chapter 3 . 12/10/2019 Genial historia espero con ansias por el próximo capitulo. Solo una cosa que la primera mujer de Naruto sea Cersei para que se cree un heredero verdadero de su familia xD. Sabes deberías usar la magia del universo Fate para que sea mas variada las magias y aya todo tipo de clases de usuarios mágicos en tu historia siendo mas sanguinarios y amorales. |
Mr.Heller chapter 2 . 10/5/2019 So, killing a chicken to eat is barbaric now? |
Ale chapter 3 . 9/5/2019 Ppr favor que sea harem y coloca a ., Daenerys T., Myrcella B., Rhaenys T. Gracias |
Ninjawithafro chapter 3 . 8/26/2019 I love this so much. It’s simple so far, which is understandable for precanon, and it’s enjoyable to read. Please update! |
Tim Ngu chapter 2 . 8/3/2019 When Naruto won in Cyvasse. Did that ability count as Enchance Intuition or Enhance Luck? Oh and good story. Add fav |
Alexander Black V chapter 1 . 8/3/2019 Please update the story author-chan por favor men |
Cellboy1123 chapter 3 . 7/25/2019 I like this Story |
Guardian of the Inheritance chapter 3 . 7/18/2019 Good job keep it up |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2019 Yeah to the retard reviewing and complaining about naruto having chakra go read your stupid fake naruto fics elsewhere. |
RedEyeUchiha123 chapter 3 . 7/12/2019 Great Story I can’t wait for Chapter 4 |