needs more chapters

WHAT?! ITS JUST A ONE SHOT?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLZ CONTINUE THISSSSSSSSSSS ITS SO GOOOOOOD. I really enjoyed this and hope you continue with writing

Ah man, it's been so long since I read a fanfic, let alone a Fairy Tail fanfic. And then it's CoLu? Whack.

To start off with, I was most impressed with the action scenes. I thought they were very well orchestrated. You probably remember that CoLu isn't my favourite of the Lucy harem but this was really adorable. :')

This is the cutest!

cute!