Write down the part 2 next while you're at it. I'm liking it alot.

Hope Emma has her sister’s power cause she’ll need them for the upcoming adventure

Can you update part 2 soon?

I hoped you would make it more different, but the grand master control really they technically already can form switch this already deviates with the dam “protectors” thing so why try to make it close to cannon anyway, any chance of that should be out the window involving all the deviations that are already there no offense

I wonder what alien will return for Jen in vengeance of Vilgax and hope she doesn’t get arrogant like her brother cause that would be bad behavior to show in front of Emma

Bring on the next chapter

You know, I was hoping you'd make Ben and Jen more humble in this universe; having gone part time to spend time with their family instead of following canon where Ben got an ego boost (which is somewhat understandable). Which brings me to a major criticism of your work: It's essentially the same as canon, barring a few subtle differences here and there. I hope you write the next few chapters to be different from canon. Other than that, I have nothing to say.

Next chapter is Vengeance of Vilgax Part 2

Okay that was a exciting chapter. And I hope Azmuth understands that Kevin is the one who mess it up, not the twins. And grand master control? That’s a ten times better then the master control, cool. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Update soon.

Can you update the next chapter shortly PLEASE

I know I’m not the first person to say this, and unless something changes, I won’t be the last. Why is Jen such a Mary Sue? In the sense that she outshines the other characters with already established professions. Magic was Gwen’s thing, now its not. The Omnitrix was Ben’s thing, and it stayed that way for a while, with the three or four same aliens with the rest being completely different and all, but now she has master control and actively uses his aliens which technically dosent make him special anymore.

Yeah you gave Ben Lifeforce (good name btw) but that dosent even the playing field when his sister is the fucking Avatar. His visions are the only thing that makes him stand out, since every other character can do what does.

I was hoping that instead of giving Ben an Anodite form (it’s confirmed Anodites don’t have any DNA that the Omnitrix could sample) you would give him Master Control, while Jen would be stuck with her normal transformations, in my mind that evens the field enough

But I do have other ideas.

Omni Kix Armor, the reboot continuity’s version of ultimate aliens (in a way) where a alien is equipped with high tech armor that provides enhanced strength durability and in some cases speed. How you could incorporate this is by making Ben tamper with the omnitrix (like he does all the time —_—) until a “glitch” is created.

This glitch, would be the Omnitrix applying the Omni Suits to an alien mid transformation, or when he commands it with Master Control. The armors can cause various effects but they mostly make an alien better than they were before, making Heatblasts flames stronger (through some scientific explanation that my peanut brain can’t think up) or by enhancing Diamondhead’s crystals etc etc.

Another way to even the field, is have Ben once again tamper with the Omnitrix, unlocking a feature only his Omnitrix has (because Azmuth didn’t add it to Jen’s for some reason or another) which is basically the same as the Ultimate Forms. If you watch the reboot, you probably know where I’m going.

The Antitrix Aliens are mutated versions of an alien species, such as “Dark Matter,” Kevin’s (Yes...Kevin) version of Grey Matter has enhanced strength capable of throwing Four Arms, taller than the Tetramand, can shoot fucking fireballs that can turn into crystal etc etc.

The mutations can be whatever you want but make them inferior in someway to Ultimate Forms, maybe a time limit or a case of “my body can’t handle this power” kind of deal.

A more original idea would be to even the playing field verbally. I mean this, “Ben’s always been better than me with the Omnitrix, he’s faster smarter stronger than me no doubt. When we first unlocked Master Control, he could switch between all of his aliens with zero effort mid battle and evade the Null Guardians...when it comes to the Omnitrix and aliens, he’s better than me, no if’s or buts.”

See what I did there? Jen, the God Anodite Reincarnation with Magic an Omnitrix and Alien X? She admitted that Ben is better than her. Better, than her. (pretend this is in bold) Showing this, showing that, if she were stripped off her magic and anodize powers, and she was left with the Ombitrix alone and she fails. While Ben succeeds would drive the point home.

There’s also like... giving Ben more aliens, but meh that’s boring, and some aliens are terrible. (Cough cough Bloxx cough)

This parts a nitpick, Ben and Jen share a hive mind, they never argue, are never mad at each other, they always go along with another without any ounce of “I don’t agree with you,” This was present in OS during Kevin’s first appearance but now they think alike, talk alike, fight alike etc. Does Ben have any insecurities about his strength compared to his teammates? Same with Becky, she says she Dosent complain but does she secretly overwork herself? Is Jen conflicted with her powers? Is Gwen uncertain of her feelings for Kevin? Is Grandpa Max secretly a stoner? Is Kevin in a sexual relationship with his car(s)? (A guy did that before)

In other words, Character Development, show them hanging out like the teenagers they are, have them interact and bond. Have them learn lessons and grow forward on.

Jeez I sound like youtube reviewer.

And have Kevin drop a few F-Bombs just for fun! Even when unnecessary!

And last but not least? Stop. Killing. Kevin’s. CAR!
Lol

Obviously these are all suggestions and nitpicks, your story, your way. I probably explained this terribly and someone will have an aneurysm at my grammer and or spelling but you know how it is.

Nonetheless can’t wait for the next chapter

Hey Jake it’s me powerman88 I am sorry for what happened between us I just wanted to know if you where doing my power rangers idea so what do you say forgive and forget and I promise I won’t spam you again

You mean, VilGax is still alive? But I thought he perished in Bellwood...

Awesome chapter! Will you still give Ben and Jen the Chimera Sui Generis, Limax, Piscciss Premann, Sotoraggian, Yautja, Ultimos' species, Synaptak's species, Uxorite, Protost, Highbreed, Argit's species, Tiny's species, Decka's species, Ssserpent's species, Pantophage (Jarett's species) and an Osmosian form?
Sorry if it's a whole lot

Is Kevin gonna get mutated or are you gonna have him learn the weapon morph ability?