Woah, this is absolutely awesome so far! The way you describe them as humans couldn't be more perfect! Johnathan having 'racoon eyes', Sarah wearing prosthetics, just Ogar as a whole. You've done these characters justice, as humans! And their home lives is just the icing on the cake. Plus, your writing style is great and easy to follow along with!

A playwright dreamer, diva-like casino owner, disabled doctor and his strong-willed daughter. It all meshes together seamlessly. I can't wait for the next update! Especially being left on that massive cliffhanger!