| Reviews for Harry Potter And The Second Chance |
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   geekymom chapter 5 . 2/26 Terrific chapter! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/25 Your changing of POV is ill-conceived. It is often used to bypass the need for good writing skills. Yoy really should broaden your approach. Your story plan is good, but you depend way too much on JKR's dialogue. Please remember that most of us have read the books. Personally, I like your writing when you deviate from cannon so I know you can write. Don't be lazy. A reminder. The site frowns on wholesale cutting and pasting and have deleted the accounts of "reading the books" stories for less blatant copying than you are doing. |
| scrappy8 chapter 5 . 2/25 great chapters |
| jadely31 chapter 6 . 2/10 Take care of yourself. Don't worry about your readers, we will be patient. Looking forward to what you have written in a few months. |
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 6 . 2/8 Get well soon and I hope you continue this story. |
| CrazySandDoc chapter 5 . 11/14/2019 I am loving the story. It is familiar enough while not being predictable. Please keep up the amazing work. |
| tony91 chapter 5 . 11/10/2019 Great story so far can't wait for the next chapter! |
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 5 . 11/10/2019 Good chapter and thanks for sharing! |
| This guy doesnt have a clue chapter 4 . 11/10/2019 Good story |
| David305 chapter 4 . 9/29/2019 Slytherin, not Slytheren Lee Jordan, not Li Geordan Gryffindor, not Gryffindore dueling fiercely, not fearsly graceful arc, ragged veil, not ark or vail not even known him for very long, not much long Moony, not Moonie warn the rest of the Gryffindors, not Gryffindore's McGonagall, not McGonigal Charlie, not Charley Legilimency and Occlumency, not Ligilimency and Oclumency Our heroes, not hero's The rest of the time passed, not past If in fact you do have a new beta, it looks like s/he is either useless or not actually doing any editing. Too many errors are getting through uncorrected. I suggest getting a new beta. On my bio page, I have several short essays on why not, why, and how to get a beta. Cheers, D |
| David305 chapter 3 . 9/28/2019 Lotsa oopses: Hedwig, not Headwig Moony, not Moonie Remembrall, not Rememberall blood traitor, not trader Crabbe and Goyle, not Crab and Goyal Slytherin, not Slytheren McGonagall, not McGonigal Daily Prophet, not profit Imperius, not Imperious Reducto, not Raducto Quirrell, not Quirell If indeed you have a new beta, either they did not edit this chapter, or they are unfamiliar with the Potterverse. It might be wise to get a second beta. |
| Isabeziers chapter 4 . 8/23/2019 trader : a person who buys and sells goods, currency, or shares. Traitor : a person who betrays someone or something, such as a friend, cause, or principle. |
| mizzrazz72 chapter 4 . 8/23/2019 Draco may really like Ron. |
| hunzbookwyrm chapter 4 . 8/22/2019 Great story, hope to see more from you soon. |
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 4 . 8/22/2019 Fun chapter and thanks for sharing! |
