| Reviews for My Brother's Prisoner |
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Guest chapter 4 . 8/22 Please update! This story is amazing! I want to see what Dabi does to Shouto next! |
RainbowStarMountain chapter 4 . 6/11 Awww, I just love this story so much. I love the whole concept of Dabi (who I guess is Touya in here?) is taking care of Shoto in here even though he's pretending that he doesn't care for Shoto. I figures that he does care for Shoto since he didn't take him to the Villian's hideout where they could just torture him. Ha, I find all the name calling Dabi does to Shoto pretty cute. He calls him brat and kid all the time, and I just find it adorable. It's that rough affection. Like, awww, he even gave him some kind of painkiller, and let him met his little cat. I think in a way Dabi is trying to comfort Shoto by letting him interact with the cat. Maybe we should have a chapter where Shoto starts running a fever from all those wounds, and Dabi has to care for him. And Shoto notes how much gentler Dabi is toward him when he's sick, and that just confuses Shoto even more. I would to love to see what's going to happen next. How is everybody at UA reacting? Hope to see what's going through Izuku and Bakugo's head. I'm pretty sure Bakguo is worried about the Half and Half even if he pretends he doesn't. What about Endeavor, Natsuo, and Fuyumi? Surely they're freaking out that their son and brother has been missing for a few days now. And what about Aizawa, or should I say Dadzawa? :D Hope you update soon. I just love this story. It's amazing! |
Jelly chapter 4 . 6/11 Please update soon! I love this! |
BOB chapter 4 . 5/9 I was enjoying it UPDATE PLEASE I BEG YOU |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/22 Dang this is so good! Please tell me it hadn't been abandoned! There are way too few Dabi/Shouto stories out there. But man, you nailed it! I'm loving the interactions, with how chill Dabi is and Shouto's apprehension and occasional fear/desperation. I just eat up stories where you can feel a constant tension present in the narrative, and then having moments where that tension just spikes. This story really has that going for it! So hey, excellent job so far!... And once again, please don't be abandoned! If you're stuck on quarantine or something, please find the motivation to update again soon! |
acochran5 chapter 4 . 8/16/2019 Aw, I honestly think cats are kind of evil but I don’t really have a problem with them. It’s cute that Dabi’s been taking care of it! I love this chapter, and it was out so quickly! Thank you sooo much for the new chapter, can’t wait to find out more. (The intense situation makes my heart beat a little faster every time I read this though). Thanks for making it! |
Lala Norisu chapter 4 . 8/16/2019 Aww dabi like cat & that is nice . And also oh man fail todoroki can't escape of apt & now he take care dabi cat . |
NoMeImporta32 chapter 3 . 8/16/2019 I love how you have chosen to portray Dabi! I think you really nailed his character. Todoroki is a bit OOC, but it works for the story you're trying to tell. Honestly, I love it. You're doing excellent so far and I can't wait to see what happens next. |
VictoriaZ-Grace chapter 3 . 8/12/2019 I love your story, but something happened to the last chapter that makes it hard to read. I’m not sure if you can see in from the author’s point of view, so if you log out and find your story I think you will be able to see what I’m talking about. If you can, you might want to fix it. |
acochran5 chapter 3 . 8/12/2019 I think the format broke, just so you know. |
Lala Norisu chapter 3 . 8/11/2019 Poor todoroki and why dabi do that to him ,he like suffer todoroki . I hope someone save him for dabi |
Lala Norisu chapter 2 . 8/10/2019 Poor dabi he lost his quirk and I feel bad for him . I hope shouto be ok |
acochran5 chapter 2 . 7/6/2019 Ha, Dabi did drug it. I think it’s hilarious how Davi listens to music and cooks. Seems so ordinary. And I can’t wait to find out what’s happening here, and why Davi decided to save Shouto. And ding in the fact Davi called Todoroki by his first name was a nice touch. I loved this chapter, I’m excited to see what happens next! |
Winterturtle chapter 2 . 7/6/2019 I've been reading this story on AO3 and I love it. Please update it there as well, it's been quite a while. Since last time it ended with quite a cliffhanger I would really like an update. |
shadowwriter01 chapter 1 . 6/30/2019 Well done. |