Reviews for Build it Up
Patougv chapter 17 . 9/18
Si happy to read this story again!
Guest chapter 17 . 9/10
Great sequel. I sincerely hope more chapters are forth coming.
Wildcat666 chapter 1 . 9/12
Amazing story ! I can't stop to read it and I was so glad to discover that there was a sequel to "Burn it Down" ! I can't wait to know what's going to happen next !

Thank you so much !
A French fan ;)
pruningshears chapter 17 . 9/10
I'm dying to know what extra parts of Lucifer's punishment Amendadiel was thinking of. And does Lucifer know what they are? At the very least I would think Amenadiel would have taunted him with the information in the past. And since a little piece of Lucifer is missing now, does that mean Chloe's got a little extra something now?
ayanahmed138 chapter 1 . 9/9
finally a sequel I remember this story like I read it yesterday... I wanted a sequel for so long ever since I read it 6 to 7 months ago...
Luinlothana chapter 17 . 9/9
It's wonderful to see you writing this story again! I have to confess I had to go back a bit to catch myself up with the story but that only reminded me of what I liked so much about it in the first place. Those three chapters were truly wonderful and I loved the wedding with the subtle undertone of something happening without it being obvious, not yet. I think you have captured two things about Lucifer that are very telling about his character and at the same time fit him perfectly. The first was the detail about him admiring the beauty of the other women the way one appreciated fine art, with it casting no shadow on his love for Chloe. I have to wonder if viewing humanity (and everything else, really) as a creation of his Father's, one that he knew from the very beginning, doesn't add to that particular perception, with people only being viewed on more personal level once he individually gets to know them. In this context, his friends and loved ones (or Chloe not to try to obscure the matter) would be viewed as individuals but humans as such, especially after a few thousands of years would be generally comprised of average or uncommon specimens (still, there could be even an act of defiance in getting to know them as individuals, seeing them not as a creation but a sum of their own choices - and it would explain the other angels' aloofness when it comes to humanity, until they got closer to them). The other thing I meant to mention was Lucifer's treatment of Trixie. I absolutely loved the way he treats his commitments to her seriously but at the same time there is this feeling that of course he would. After all, he values his word and I doubt he would ever treat giving it less than seriously just because he is giving it to a child. Even if, or perhaps particularly because, he doesn't have all that much experience with children and for someone his age the time it takes them to grow up (and the relative age difference between a schoolchild and an adult) is negligible with enough perspective. So even if he gave his word to buy Trixie pink candy floss every odd Thursday I have absolutely no doubt he would treat the commitment seriously (even if it was to the utter frustration of Chloe). But I have a feeling that I digressed slightly somewhere in there ;) In any case, I am very glad that you are writing again. Thank you for sharing!
Angely30 chapter 17 . 9/9
Amo esta historia... Seguiré esperando tus actualizaciones
NewLight 30 chapter 17 . 9/8
They are so cute in this chapter lol I couldn’t help but enjoy it
SPCLjmm chapter 17 . 9/8
Luv how Lucifer is re Trixie. Chloe too!
SPCLjmm chapter 16 . 9/8
Great chapter. Can’t help but wonder what that bit of “weather” might mean!
Casey525 chapter 16 . 9/8
Love this
mendenbar01 chapter 15 . 9/6
I could stand to let Lucifer do this for me so quit squirming so much, Chloe!
Angely30 chapter 16 . 9/7
Me encantó... He estado esperando la actualización desde hace un tiempo. Es hermoso
swingaway1234 chapter 16 . 9/6
Glad you've gotten back to the story. It's a very good one.
NewLight 30 chapter 16 . 9/5
I couldn’t help but think how awesome of an episode this would be lol. I enjoyed it
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