You still miss conjunctions in your sentences.

This is progressing well. I actually forgot i fav'd it. Good thimg i did :3

You updated amazing work question though is
Shadow mare gonna be in this story hope he is other then what the others are gonna say about Dragonborn

I'm a simple man ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) I see [Angry lilelf] new update I click hard (‿)

Wowsers! The beginning romance between Saeko and the Dragonborn, I like it! *Thumbs UP!* I shall wait the action for the next chapter.

Thank you for updating love it amazing work hope you update very soon please

Not bad so far. Any chance Saeko might still get and keep the kimono from the Takagi estate down the line? Dovahkiin coukd enchant it to act as armor or enhance her atributes to help fighting Them... Just an idea I had. I like my waifus to dress a bit more conservative than usual, but hey its your story, you do what you want. I'm just sharing my own ideas. Look forward to reading more.

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Fun start. Thanks. Continue

I think this is good star and great idea hope you can update soon please

Seems like an interesting start

I just saw your poll, which I didn't vote.
mainly because I don't see the interest of this poll if we can choose all the girls.
do you really intend to have 40 girls in Dragonborn/Dovahkiin's harem (well, I guess it will be harem given the number of choices) or will you pick them later?

Shouldn't the Dragonborn be shocked at the technological difference? because I doubt that there are many cars in Skyrim! XD

Good keep it up