Reviews for The Price of Forgiveness
gerbilsrcute chapter 11 . 7/1/2019
Loved the ending. They are all now working together
AnkorB chapter 11 . 6/29/2019
Well sadly it ended to soon, but thanks for sharing this with us.
I loved to see how Kara and Lena fixed things between them
SpencerFan chapter 11 . 6/29/2019
Chapter 9...

"Even by comic book standards going super villain over the lie would be lame." - to be fair, if it was multiple lies and betrayal for a character that had never done either themselves I could get villain but Lena did keep the Haranel quite and she did keep working with Lex quite so she's not exactly one to say you shouldn't lie; is it bull that Kara didn't tell her before Lex when she's told literally everyone she's ever met? Yes. It is also lame Lena is a super genius and she doesn't know but that's another topic to itself. It's crappy Kara says Lena isn't like her family yet stays quite because she doesn't trust Lena's family but it's not exactly a go evil over move I'd say because Lena has to understand wanting to protect her identity from said family members. Be angry at Kara sure but act like she's committed the greatest sin against you so you're now her sworn enemy no. Again if Winn and Mon aren't going to become bad guys because of their family and people lying to them than neither should Lena!

In to the story...

"This place has better defences than the DEO." - fair! "I will not be Supergirl until you have given me the all clear." - that seems suspect, I wouldn't trust that Alex. To be fair to Kara's case Lex might have been worse without Lena around to nudge him at times not to be completely evil; she's definitely the good guy of that family! A sweet scene with Kara and Lena in the lab!

Chocolate will also get you points with Kara Kelly; if you find some way to make chocolate potstickers you will be her new favorite person on Earth! Outside of Alex of course because even when chocolate potstickers Alex is still Kara's awesome number one. :) You can't be fired from somewhere you never worked Kara!

Chapter 10...

I second no Mon; MAYBE if they have him be JUST a friend for Kara ok but anything more just keep him off my screen thanks!

On to the story...

I wonder if Alex is going to be jealous of the secret lab? :) That's totally fair of Lena to say she isn't just going to follow what Kara says! Lol "Are you doing anything stupid?".

Chapter 11...

If Alex shows up at the L-Corp as often as Kara needs help someone is going to do a gossip piece saying Lena is dating the FBI director since they still don't seem to know the DEO exists. Ha. Also she's totally kind of jealous of that super lab. :) I would think Lena could fire Nia not that she would of course because she needs actual journalists at the paper not just Kara. Ha! Lol like proof has stopped Alex before, shout out to Max! :) "We're all working together in a new secret base. It's kinda fun." - and there's no bats to bite her. Ha.

A good story but I'm still kind of bummed about the cliffhanger. :)

I look forward to the next story!
maryamm70 chapter 11 . 6/29/2019
Amazing story! Looking forward to reading more stories whenever you're ready
LOCISVU chapter 11 . 6/28/2019
I’m just happy that their friendship is mended.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/28/2019
Awesome chapter Jennifer Baratta.
CF2 chapter 11 . 6/28/2019
So the last chapter.

Like Alex's shock reaction to

the base.

And her

being appeased reaction

to Kara still using

the DEo too.

I get why Alex may of

been irked at first though.

You could feel

Alex having a little

possessiveness

on display.

Like seeing the team

at the new base.

I'm glad Lena

also apologies to Alex

too.

LOL at Brainy's reaction.

That was so Brainy.

Like the Nia bit too.

Great debate scene

on how to draw

Leviathan out.

Also cool that

Kara's journalism

is going to be used again.

Really great note

to end the story

on,everybody

working together.

Great job on this

story.I have a

feeling the show

isn't going to handle

the Kara and Lena

situation nearly as

well.
HeroWitch chapter 11 . 6/28/2019
"What's wrong with the DEO?" Alex asked.

"Nothing, until I am fired again. Plus it is somewhere Nia can go as well. I'm not replacing the DEO."

"Okay." Alex said looking slightly appeased.

"And you are welcome anytime." Kara added.

Yeah, Alex isn't seem happy.

"You said I could bring people." Kara said.

"Yes of course. I just thought everyone was tied up with games' night." Lena replied.

"Not when someone is out to kill Kara." Alex pointed out as she moved over to the screens to look at the images.

So cool! Good terms for everyone.
Great chapter, great story!
gerbilsrcute chapter 10 . 6/28/2019
“Are you trying to guilt me into completely forgiving you?"
"No. Why is it working?" - LOL great line I lived it. Nice seeing Kara & Lenas Friendship on the road to recovery.
LOCISVU chapter 10 . 6/28/2019
Please let them name their base of operations!
Guest chapter 10 . 6/27/2019
Awesome chapter Jennifer Baratta
LisaMT chapter 10 . 6/27/2019
I really hope the powers that be wrap up the Lena feeling betrayed story line similar to how you did. Lena can have an episode where she feels hurt by Kara but then I hope she moves on and realizes it's not all about her.
Ceikaiyia Cheeks THE DIRECTOR chapter 10 . 6/27/2019
This is good. Can't wait to read more
maryamm70 chapter 10 . 6/27/2019
Love the conversation! I'm in love with your stories
CF2 chapter 10 . 6/27/2019
I love how Kara EATS

when feeling better. lol

I'm so glad things are

honestly,

they probably will never

be the same just by

Lena now knowing

Kara is Supergirl.

Yes,Lena hid things

too.

It will also take time to

heal things between them.

Oh yes,big sis Alex won't forget.

I do love how forgiving Kara is

and sees the best in everyone

but it's a good thing she

has pragmatic Alex as

backup.

I'm glad Lena

showed up.

I so love that

Lena apologized

and recognizes

how she acted.

And how she hid things

from Kara too.

I so love Lena knowing

how Kara has always been

there for her as both Kara

and Supergirl.

I wish Alex could hear all this.

Such amazing scen between them.

LOL to the kale.

I love Kara's reaction to

Lena wanting to work with her.

Awesome secret base.

Hope Alex gets a look at it.

It really says a lot

IMO that Lena has done this

for Kara.

I do like how Lena

sets those ground rules

and the fact that she doesn't

always agree with Supergirl.

And she will continue to do things

her way if she believes it's right.

Kara can disagree and argue her

point but not to expect

Lena to follow if Lena truly

believes it's the right move.

This basically address their

fallout in season 3.

I'm glad Kara will

meet Lena a bit on this point

and I get her concern

that Lena hasn't really

forgiven her just

will to work with with her

as ,Lena

is right that it will take

time to get there fully and

IMO this is a big first

step.

"No,Why,is it working?"

lololololol

I'm think it is important

that Lena made clear she never

hated Supergirl.

LOL at the puppy dog

eyes comment.

Another very strong chapter.

Loved everything between

Kara and Lena.
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