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RedPanDaisy chapter 6 . 6/25 Omg Dis is sooooooo cuuuuuuuuutttttteeeee |
ArriatheDragon chapter 15 . 4/18 I was unaware there was a version of this song where the baby doesn't die- |
ArriatheDragon chapter 10 . 4/17 Ahhh he's so cute! |
ArriatheDragon chapter 2 . 4/15 I like Luffy's taste in movies. If it had been me, I'd have adopted the both of them on the spot lol. Prolly cause in impulsive xD |
Miss Lib93 chapter 17 . 12/11/2019 Thank you for completing the story and writing it in the first place! I'm glad Luffy is growing and that Zoro made a friend; also that it was a happy ending. I enjoyed reading this. Have a good day! |
Miss Lib93 chapter 15 . 12/10/2019 Thank goodness Zoro is okay! At least it wasn't like his nightmare. It's nice that Luffy and Nami got to bond more. Thanks for writing |
Miss Lib93 chapter 11 . 12/8/2019 Anytime you have angst in this, it actually gets me teary (which doesn't happen very often unless the story is really good). Thanks for writing this and giving Zoro and Luffy a loving home! |
Katr5432 chapter 17 . 12/5/2019 Lovely story! so cute! I also want to thank you for the details and work. I didn't know try the disorder before and your story gave an in depth look at a family dynamic with disabilities. I feel educated and happy. Good story |
honeyblabla chapter 15 . 10/2/2019 Oh i really needed it, so lovely. I really love the way you write these parent-child relationships, it's so real but it's still so cute. honestly after I read some of your other stories involving some character like luffy's mother or father figure, I was very interested in that, it's just so wonderful. The song part made me happy and thrilled, they are such a precious family, really precious. |
Servillius chapter 15 . 9/30/2019 Such a sweet chapter... :) |
kavakmelahat chapter 14 . 9/23/2019 Luffy was so cute in this chapter I didn't expect to see Coby though, it was pretty surprising. And since there is Vivi in this story, it would be so nice to see her with KozaI ship them so much |
honeyblabla chapter 13 . 9/18/2019 Owwn this was really lovely, i feel i could read a hundred stories with baby luffy and would never get bored, this precious little angel deserves the universe but i feel a little sad for Nami i hope to see more of her and luffy before the end. I still can't get over the cute relationship of Luffy and Usopp, they're both so adorable and Usopp is so cool being understanding with his little cousin. I hope all is well with your classes, I would like to have more encouragement in my school to learn about these subjects. |
Mirioria chapter 13 . 9/13/2019 Aww this story warm my heart |
kavakmelahat chapter 13 . 9/13/2019 It was such a heartwarming chapter Usopp is absolutely the best cousin/friend It's too bad Garp couldn't see Luffy's 5th birthday, I would have been a good occasion to create a bound with the boys... Also I always feel bad for Zoro, I know he loves his brother more than anything but he deserves to enjoy a bit more his new life... I want him to do something just for himself, like starting to lear martial arts or any other sport( with Mihawk as his trainer of course) and Luffy would just watch him practicing. And just imagine Zoro winning a tournament for the first time, maybe he would look finally as happy as Luffy... I want Zoro genuinely happy just for himself for once. |
kavakmelahat chapter 1 . 9/13/2019 I was supposed to study, then I started this fic during a break. I couldn't stop anymore They are just too adorable together, it was so pleasing to see a little caring Zoro with his baby brother. I loved to see their improvement and I cried sooooo much when the brothers weren't feeling well. It really is a fabulous fiction, hope the next chapters will come soon, I can't wait to see what will happen. |