Reviews for Spiral |
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LiteratureSoccerEnthusiast chapter 2 . 6/18/2019 Poor Bella! |
sherylb chapter 2 . 6/18/2019 Jake is a selfish asshole |
sue1zide chapter 2 . 6/17/2019 I don't know why it seems so easy for most men to leave their families |
joshuasmom131 chapter 2 . 6/17/2019 Wow ummmm jakes an ass for leaving like that but that’s ok I’m team Edward and Bella lol |
joshuasmom131 chapter 1 . 6/17/2019 Great first chapter! |
frostedglaze chapter 2 . 6/17/2019 The jackass got another woman pregnant didn’t he? Or he left her for Leah. |
lillianolivia.white chapter 2 . 6/17/2019 Well, well., good riddance, Jake. So Edward is an actor in this story. Sounds good. |
lillianolivia.white chapter 1 . 6/17/2019 Good start. I can put up with Jake for awhile, I guess. I like that Bella is achieving her dream. |
SunflowerFran chapter 2 . 6/17/2019 Obviously Jake is an idiot. Good start, can't wait for more. |
cullengirl08 chapter 2 . 6/17/2019 I would have been a bit more angry with Jake, but I guess with Bella being in shock and this coming out of nowhere, she's kind of at a loss. |
avagurl chapter 2 . 6/17/2019 jake the jerk-is it still Leah? always happy to see Bella send him packing. |
cullengirl08 chapter 1 . 6/17/2019 Good start to the story and I'm looking forward to seeing how it continues... |
Kgunter34 chapter 2 . 6/17/2019 I like what you have so far, I hope you continue. |