Reviews for Spiral
LiteratureSoccerEnthusiast chapter 2 . 6/18/2019
Poor Bella!
sherylb chapter 2 . 6/18/2019
Jake is a selfish asshole
sue1zide chapter 2 . 6/17/2019
I don't know why it seems so easy for most men to leave their families
joshuasmom131 chapter 2 . 6/17/2019
Wow ummmm jakes an ass for leaving like that but that’s ok I’m team Edward and Bella lol
joshuasmom131 chapter 1 . 6/17/2019
Great first chapter!
frostedglaze chapter 2 . 6/17/2019
The jackass got another woman pregnant didn’t he? Or he left her for Leah.
lillianolivia.white chapter 2 . 6/17/2019
Well, well., good riddance, Jake. So Edward is an actor in this story. Sounds good.
lillianolivia.white chapter 1 . 6/17/2019
Good start. I can put up with Jake for awhile, I guess. I like that Bella is achieving her dream.
SunflowerFran chapter 2 . 6/17/2019
Obviously Jake is an idiot. Good start, can't wait for more.
cullengirl08 chapter 2 . 6/17/2019
I would have been a bit more angry with Jake, but I guess with Bella being in shock and this coming out of nowhere, she's kind of at a loss.
avagurl chapter 2 . 6/17/2019
jake the jerk-is it still Leah?
always happy to see Bella send him packing.
cullengirl08 chapter 1 . 6/17/2019
Good start to the story and I'm looking forward to seeing how it continues...
Kgunter34 chapter 2 . 6/17/2019
I like what you have so far, I hope you continue.