great story so far keep it up

Liked the beginning but it quickly got too much for me. Seriously. What the hell? Not gonna discourage others as there definitely is people who love these sort of stories, so yeah I'm done halfway through this chapter

You say that Daenerys x Robb would be harmful to the "First Men" angle your pushing, I agree. However I cant imagine how your excusing Leana x Robb considering it presents the exact same problem. Leana is not of the First Men, she is a foreigner. She was born and raised on foreign soil, so how the hell can Robb marry her without everyone seeing him as a massive hypocrite?

Ive been enjoying this story so far but I dont like how forcefully you thrust the whole Leanna/Robb relationship forward. Out of no where Robb has suddenly developed feelings for a character thats been mentioned like twice, apparently he likes her ass and nothing else was mentioned, The next day he decides he's going to marry her? Maybe it would have been a good relationship, but it feels completely forced and unnatural.

Tx

Mc is an inhuman, arrogant, manipulative, annoyingly, cautious, prick who is an asshole AND you are making shit up as you go to, overall I'd say this 4 out of ten for sheer bullshit luck that he has.

I was really hoping for the MC to intercept Danaerys and Viserys, and turn her into either his queen or a slave.
Also you say the SI isn't a well educated person and yet you bloody had him make distilleries and what have you. This is not something that would come from either his or Voldy's knowledge.

Nah, liquors and spirits will never replace wine in high society. This is one thing all these novels that have people creating novel products miss. Wine in the aristocracy, or noble houses, is about prestige. The Arbor wines hold prestige, the spirits created from tubers and grains do not. Most wine sale that makes revenue is that to the nobles or high profile catering inns/restaurants so the advent of the drinks from the North wouldn't impact their profits on wine too much.

"I don't want to change cannon too much" proceeds to change EVERYTHING.

Nice

Okay I have confess something. I have been avoiding this story for a long time. When you started publishing, I had read the first two chapters and I was immediately turned off. There is op and there is OP. Your version is a step above that.

Still looking at your other stories, I am going to give you the benefit of doubt. But still man, your MC is just tooo much...

Still I will read everything you have posted till now and leave a review.

Great story!

Daenerys's storyline should continue as it was in the show and books. I hope the ironborn get destroyed when they attack the north. Since Robb already plundered Valyria and collected the valyrian steel weapons and destroyed the dragonbinders Euron won't be able to get anything there.

SYMPA

went shit