oh, loved this!

I love it so far

Wonderful! Thanks for sharing

I think you meant connected to our home.
Wouldn't it be my instructions will suffice?
And sliding out of the limo?

Once she is turned will she be killing Eddie?
Why in hell is Aro setting up balls for her time there?
Seriously? I gather this story is written for a bunch of teenboppers.

Charlie isn't much of a cop if he can be so easily bullshitted by her.
I wonder how long it is going to take before she figures out that fairy boy is not her mate ?

Admiration not admiral.
She is so much above that child it is not funny.
Will she end up with Felix I wonder?

If I were a walking statue and had to live like the squirrel munchers do I think I would walk into a burning pyre.

Didyme.
If he left. Or if he leaves.
Flanked.
I am guessing they will have to go on a little trip to retrieve the idiot and Bella unless they can catch them before they leave the country?
I have to agree with many people when I say that Aro a little insane if there is such a thing.

Dem has blonde hair

I really enjoyed this story and found it interesting. The strong Bella was a nice change too. I liked the fact Rosalie and Alice are close to her and her protectors when they go to Voltera. I enjoyed the creativeness throughout the story, from finding her mate and the gradualness both Felix and Bella realized it, to Bella's unique change. And I laughed during the battle with what happened to Edward (before he arrived when he destroyed Victoria, and after he arrived when he met his demise.).

What was hard for me was the grammar and sometimes the spelling. However, I did see on your profile page that you are from Italy. Therefore, I can understand why now. I applaud you learning a second language, as well as how well you did considering English is (likely) not your primary language. For that, Brava!

Great story. Thank you for sharing.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

How neat that you were in Finland. I spent ten days in in Finland (with a small trip to Sweden as well) last year from Thanksgiving to early December. It was pretty cold but surprisingly sunny during our visit (my sister goes regularly with her husband who is from there and says it usually is fairly dark that time of year). The shop windows in downtown Helsinki were beautifully decorated for the holidays. :)

A Bella/Jasper story that's rated M? I CAN'T WAIT!