| Reviews for Jagged Sword |
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Lance John Estrella Bautista chapter 18 . 7/3 its getting good hope to see update soon |
Uday Sra chapter 18 . 6/2 Awesome |
Sdarkness05 chapter 18 . 5/28 was the grave a portal to the everdistant utopia? because the noted design is oddly familiar. Can't wait for the next chapter this is a really good story |
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 11 . 5/12 Shirou, Angra Mainyu, and the Old Blood is a volatile combination. I love it. |
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 6 . 5/11 I want to read some GAR dammit, but it takes a journey to become worthy of being one of those. |
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 4 . 5/11 Bloodborne is about fighting, yes, but FSN is about self discovery and the journey of it all. Not enough fighting for a Bloodborne, yes, but the journey and self discovery parts are starting to get fleshed out, and that's what I came for. I want to know and read about a Shirou that's drawn into the Hunt. I want to see his mind tested, and his ideals hammered until they both become Steel. I want to read about a Shirou that either must succumb to the Grim Reality of his situation, or that clings desperately to his Ideals in denial of said Reality.I Maybe even a Shirou that becomes the Eldritch Abomination to save someone. |
Gwynbleidd99 chapter 18 . 5/11 Man this is an awesome story so far! Really enjoying that it follows the Bloodborne side of things, tbh there are so many fate fics out there that the Bloodborne ones are really fun to read! Makes me wish I'd made it further through the game before putting it away in defeat, but alas I'll live vicariously through the poor soul that is Emiya Shirou. |
WuhanCorona9000 chapter 18 . 5/10 What the heck is a Hunters Paradise? Is it lorewise or something you made? New to the game and it's lore |
Guest chapter 18 . 3/16 Pretty good, I’m rather impressed. |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/14 Make shirou a great would be awesome |
ExiledLagacy chapter 1 . 3/6 I have a theory that Shirou’s reality marble is capable of traveling into a different dimension. Heck, it even possible for him if he can time travel correct me if I’m wrong. You should make an origin where Shirou is desperately trying to become a magus that he was training so hard that it caused a trigger of his reality marble to send him a different world which he end up in Yharnam and a hunter dream. |
The Final Faux chapter 18 . 3/5 What a glorious fic this is. You've taken a few liberties, but you've done well with them. That the eldritch horror Caster summoned became a bridge to connect the world of F/SN and Yharnam is a solid explanation for why Shirou can now visit it. You've also done a fantastic job at fleshing out Henryk and Gascoigne as well as the relationship between them and Shirou, giving him a great motivation for growing stronger, seeking the Holy Grail in Fuyuki, and delivering Yharnam from its suffering. Also, kid Gil is objectively best Gil. |
Old leaf chapter 18 . 3/4 Found out about this fanfic yesterday and already love it! I'm curious to see how the horrors of Yarnam will affect Shirou and the path he will follow, both in that accursed city and in Fuyuki. I'm already dying to see the interactions between this 'new' Shirou and his servant when we will arrive at the 'Grail War' arc, but for that i think we'll have to wait for a while. Until then hope to see our protagonist make some development with his 'standard' magecraft and maybe managing to merge it with the 'arcane' one from Bloodborne as a compensation for his struggles... or maybe not. Who knows with his e-rank luck always waiting behind the corner? Anyway, good job so far and hope to see another update soon! :) |
Atryx10 chapter 18 . 2/23 This is really good. Not so sure why you'd write something so cursed as the previous chapter, but whatever. Looking forward to more. |
Skrrt chapter 1 . 2/21 Why the fuck is this not 1# Love the writing. |