Awesome chapter. Can't wait for more

Woah, I'm getting Red Son Superman vibes from this chapter and it probably doesn't help that I'm imagining his voice from the movie.

I love exposition

when are you going to update star wars rebels: new origin. I really want to see how this story plays out

Are you going to update Star Wars Rebels: A New Origin Story yet?

Really enjoyed this one as usual. I really enjoyed how Kal was with Adam and Cinder. Neo is also just awesome, and I hope Kal gets Cinder aswell, because I believe she isn't that bad beneath her selfish desires. I agree that this Kal shouldn't turn good, He is far to cool for as a semi evil character.

Awesome

I really enjoyed this chapter I have only just read it because I didn't have a notification for some reason anyway loved Kal floating in space to get away from all the sound and how he dealt with the moon debris also loved that he has cameras set up in ozpins academy and I am excited to see what Kal's response will be to Adam demanding answers and what Kal then does to Adam And Sienna.

The Prince of Darkness is in control for now on most things going on, but I get the feeling Sienna Khan will due the day she crossed Kal El in a defiant manner when she is in no position to risk the White Fang. Raven has a difficult choice to make as well, spy on Ozpin for Kal or suffer the consequences for not accepting this? Decisions, decisions. With Vale's security system breached and Ozpin being none the wiser, every plan they make Kal will know about. And keep in mind, this guy can fly into outer space at his own leisure whenever he likes, making secret plans of his own without Salem's knowledge, it's an advantage.

Kal El is making a lot of moves, especially now that he has adopted a public persona as the founder of Lux. His relationship with Neo is dangerous but sexy too.

Considering that Kryptonite has not shown up in Remnant, it's safe to assume that Krypton was swallowed up by their red sun instead of exploding due to an unstable core, which would have sent Kryptonite shards floating into space. And Kal's only susceptible to magic, not completely weak to it, if he trains himself to increase his resistance to magic, then it might as well have the same effect as regular weapons or semblance, which is little to none. Amber put up a fight, but even with Qrow accompanying her, she still lost the fight, for one major reason: fighting a magic black pool of destruction enhanced natural born OP Kryptonian, allowing Cinder to take the Fall Maiden's full powers on the first try, unlike canon where she only took half of the power the first time, and the remaining half during the Fall of Beacon before it could be transferred to Pyrrha. So Kal El contacts Raven Branwen without Salem's knowledge, and he realizes that Raven is the Spring Maiden, though his main reason for meeting her is to offer her the chance to expose Ozpin's true nature to the entire world, which she accepts with glee. Ozpin will not see it coming.

please update star wars rebels new origin

gr8t work

I'm loving this story so far. I've reread it about 3 or 5 times now. I really hope Kal stays evil I enjoy him more this way and think it would be better to keep good guy Kal in your Hunter Of Steel story which I also love. Cant wait for more.

Love Blair

Captain America and Rwby crossover