Great story !

Wow. Loved the exploration of the languages Logan could speak. Makes you respect him even more.

Ah, this was brilliant! I do love it when Logan off-handedly shows some serious skillz ;)
(And oh, do I adore those comics.)

Excellent RoLo build-up, too!

And darn, great team-work-character-writing-dialogues-'n'-stuff. Love it to bits.

Keep writing and have a magical day!

~hervissa :)

Secrets. The best, and the worst things.

good work! yeah considering he was at all the modern wars pretty much? essentially soldier for the British Empire all hail!

well. good fun that he knows a lot, was amusing them figuring stuff out, and tis odd all the thigns you remember and NTO remember, skills and stuff but MEMORIES being off.. well.
interesting bit the other dialect languages MODE of talk bit.
still amusing back at the beginning type of talks!

nice

Best parts are Sean & Logan but the line, order a drink & tell a girl she's pretty really was funny & then Sean's comments about flirting & aft that Storm & Wolvie though it took a while to get to it but I did like the Scott parts & the ending was nice but you left out a word, I think at least, when you said "Not looking at each, Logan & Ororo fell silent" think you might want to make it "each other" maybe.

Wow!
This was VERY much worthy of a good read!
Thank you for posting this!

I felt that this was a really nice opener for a Logan-Storm relationship. I know they get together for a little bit in the Comics and Beast comes back or something like that but I don’t know how it ended or if it even did in some other universe. Marvel has so many universes and different retconned comic books it’s hard for me to keep track. I really liked it though and the wide range of dialects and languages they know was a perfect way to get them talking.

This was a nice little detour from the norm. It gave us a look into the past of two characters that we’ve come to know as they are now.

Pleasure reading your stuff, sir. Thank you much!