Did I miss the last chapter? I must’ve. Oops.

Either way, this review won’t be too long. We’re discussed a lot already in the past, and there isn’t too much to bring up I don’t think.

I’m in interested in seeing where everything is heading. I saw the very small hint at setup between Lillie and Ash, as well, this chapter. Feels bad for Mallow, though. Dawn was in the right now to spill anything, since Ash hadn’t yet, but still, it’s an oof moment.

I had a feeling that Greninja already knew what was happening, just because of their bond, but I needed to see it to confirm, which you have. I’m wondering what exactly he’s conflicted about- going back to Ash, or generally going with Serena, because he knows she was involved. Either way I think he’ll end up reuniting with Ash at some point, or soon.

With all that’s happening, you have to give us the best Alolan League of our lives toward the end of the story. Kiawe’s resolve to get stronger, Ash’s as well, all of these returning characters, and so much more! Either this, or you should incorporate Journeys (I know we talked about this before but I just wanted to bring it up again) so we can see the Championship, in which even more characters can participate and return and Ash can catch the Pokémon he now has in the anime.

Either way, very nicely done. Looking forward to more to come!

Something I've been wondering while reading, where's pikachu? It feels like he's not with Ash sometimes. Is he chilling with older pokemon back at the center? Anyways, this was a very chilled chapter I liked it. I also like that Greninja knows and doesn't trust a b****.
Dont worry about replying back to me I know you can't. :)

Nice to see you updating again. I really enjoy reading your story.

Greninja knows what Serena did through his and Ash's bond, doesn't he?
Ash-Greninja using a Z-Move or Blaze Infernape using one will be badass though
Great chapter and hope you update again

Great Chapter, glad to see you back man I really like the story so far and I can't wait for more of Ash's character development and for Rockruff to evolve. As for who'll end up with Ash I'd considered Lillie

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yuo know, this is one of my fav stories. hope you keep doing gud here :-)

unique experiences my ass
he met Arceus, fought alongside the creation trio to stop Arceus from ending mankind, travelled back in time to stop the event that caused Arceus to get angry in the first place, saved Arceus live etc. and that's just one event.
sure you could call that unique but that's like saying that the ocean is wet
true but... well you get my point

Waiting for an update

Bagon really out here headbutting everyone.
I like long chapters so this was great! If only the girls knew how many girls liked Ash, but his boy is denser than a slowbro. Lol

Great job! Keep up the good work.

Regarding Serena will Ash reflect on Entei's mind control on his mom and conclude that it wasn't her fault what happened even if he can't bring himself to be with her
Also the evil Malamar in Kalos did stuff similar and Ash should know that the victim has no choice

Took me a while to read this story, in all honesty, i wasn't expecting much of this since it was another ash betrayed story, but you handled it really well! it actually made sense, the way you write is also pretty catchy, really looking forward to what happens next! me personally i hope ash ends up with lillie tbh, i just really enjoy their relationship

I'm enjoying this story it's really great keep up the good work and just curious will ash possibly end up with more than one girl say for example 4 or 5 girls like dawn Lille Mallow Lana and Serena just those 5 because I happen to notice dawn Mallow Lille and bit of Lana all each have their own crush on ash and they like him in a romantic way so instead of just one girl how about it be Mallow dawn Lille Serena and Lana that way they all win and continue to be by ashs side show him their support and help him through the difficult times he's been going through since the incdent happened when almost everyone batrayed him and have someone who's still chasing after him who likely wants him dead

Great chapter as always