| Reviews for The Girl Who Forgets: Book 1 Of The Forgetmenot Chronicles |
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bowtiesandcryingeyes chapter 1 . 6/24 I really love your story and hope you continue it. I'm completely obsessed with story line by now lol. And I love how you write a lot each chapter. As the doctor would say, Fantastic! |
Goddess-of-the-Forest1013 chapter 2 . 2/25 I love this story! Cannot wait for the next chapter- please don’t abandon it! |
Diving in chapter 2 . 2/19 I really like your story so far. It's original and interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. And I'm hoping you didn't abandon it. I'm prepared to bribe you for the next chapters... Do you like cookies? |
EatsBooks chapter 2 . 1/11 Awesome story! I look forward to the next chapter! |
wolfgirl232323 chapter 2 . 1/10 Omgs I love this book so far! Please update it when you have a chance. |
Lil'Sparrow7 chapter 2 . 1/4 Man I really hope to see this continued one day... it’s such a unique story and such a breath of fresh air! |
NightHunterDeath chapter 2 . 11/22/2019 Oooo. Time Lady? Maybe she was on the verge of regenerating but didn't because she was saved in time? Maybe it sort of stopped at the beginning, allowing a slight change in hair color but nothing else before it stopped? As for the forgetting thing, really interested in how both the Doctor and Elissa are going to react the next day. (I love the idea in theory but would hate it in practice - too heartbreaking) Maybe she'll get lucky and it was only happening on Earth? On another note for her forgetting though, is it possible, if she is a Time Lady, that she wanted to forget? In her last moments of living before being 'Elissa' she wanted to erase the memory of Gallifrey burning, wanted to forget all the horrors of war, and regenerated, this time not being able to remember anything from before from that day onward, and it just keeps happening. It probably doesn't mean anything, but Elissa didn't want to work at the hospital. I know she said it was because of her condition, but what if it was deeper than that? What if its because on some level of subconsciousness, she knows she can't get near a hospital? She could have two hearts and never know. She can't make an appointment because she won't remember anything, won't remember to tell them what's wrong with her. Will the Doctor try to figure out what's wrong with her? I would assume so, because she's become his companion. I can't imagine that he'll just let it lie and not try to figure out what's going on. Speaking of the Doctor, he said he loved the first trip with his companions. Well... now he has a companion that can't remember her first trip, and therefore every trip they go on will be a first to her unless they figure out what's wrong with her memory. (Isn't it suspicious that Jabe didn't manage to scan Elissa before she died? I know in canon it was very clear that Rose was human, but Elissa... not so much) It's a wonderful story, like many of your stories are. (I will admit I've only read this and the Bonded Saga, but I am planning to read the Lost Girl soon. Not sure about Wanderlust though) I can't wait to read more, and hope you update soon. I really want to know what's going on with Elissa, and how the Doctor is going to react. (Will Elissa even remember the golden glow, because she didn't write it down? Or will it become another thing she forgets?) |
Lil'Sparrow7 chapter 1 . 10/16/2019 My mind keeps coming back to this fic! It’s so goooood! |
Lil'Sparrow7 chapter 2 . 10/3/2019 Okay this is a new favorite! It's so unique and gah! I love it. |
Faery66 chapter 2 . 8/24/2019 Hope to read more soon. D |
savethemadscientist chapter 2 . 7/25/2019 Another brilliant chapter, loving the mystery surrounding Elissa Curious about why she was glowing when she was trapped in the room. Makes me wonder if she's human or not. Looking forward to more. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/21/2019 Maybe a damaged chameleon arch that caused her to forget everything every twenty four hours. |
TheLadyO chapter 2 . 7/21/2019 Please update soon! |
time-twilight chapter 2 . 7/20/2019 What was that glow with Elissa, is she a time lady or something. |
bored411 chapter 2 . 7/20/2019 Ooh curious to see her trying to figure out the next day once she forgets everything. And eager to read more and find out what was up with her boiling skin or whatever that was. Super curious what that means for her and what she is, if not human :) so I hope you update again soon! |