This was a sweet story. Thank you for sharing.

Cute story, thanks for sharing

Ok this chaptter did Better showing us that she did have a attraction for Edward back in the day.. But then how the fuck did she fall for Mike? Or did Edward start ignoring her?

I'm confused on the details cause by the flashbacks.. It seems cut and dry that they are heading for a relationship.. When did they fall out cause Edward and Mike are drastically different.. Cause if she is into bikes and gritty dudes... How the fuck did Mike even have a chance?

So now all of a sudden Mike is a villain and she wants something different? UGH

You have not written her being a attracted to Edward at all. You made it apparent that Edward is head over heels for her but the opposite is not true.. Not even close. At least you have not made it apparent.

So Bella didn't have a thought of Edward last chapter.. Only that she maybe didn't want to be a trophy wife... I'd rather Edward ride off into the sunset and let her become a bitter bitch that tell young women to go live their life.

Thanks for sharing this one with us, I truly enjoyed it.

Thank you!

Yay!

I probably would have sat on the bike refusing to move until he agreed to run away!

I’m wondering if Edward silently pined for little-boots, waiting for Her to Notice Him, or if he Spoke Up and she said No?

O.O

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Sounds like a fine southern wedding...
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hope that’s “Mr Right” swooping in to save the day !

Such a sweet story. Love how you write them.
Would love more if the mood strikes you.

Thanks

So so great.

Love It!

Cute story. Thank you for sharing.