| Reviews for A Hand To Hold (1) |
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  Jared 19 chapter 1 . 6/22 this is... badly written. Suddenly, I wish I was Jared, 19. |
 IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 14 . 6/23 Looking good |
| a.bunda chapter 39 . 6/9 Bravo! I am look forward to the sequel. |
| geekymom chapter 38 . 5/22 Terrific chapter! |
| teachergirl chapter 38 . 5/21 This chapter is just a plagiarized version of JKR's chapter with just phrases jammed together with what seems like no thought. Plagiarism is a crime even on this site. |
| hallowmask123 chapter 38 . 5/21 It feels as if you are losing quality of writing as this goes on. |
| Bob chapter 26 . 5/4 Wait Dumbledore says she will be in danger if Harry doesn't get to her in time and she is fine with that? On one hand thank you for having the story tagged as drama. Lots of stories here that are mostly drama don't bother to put the warning. On the other hand just because you are writing a drama story doesn't mean you should have nonsensical drama like that. |
| Bob chapter 21 . 5/4 You have Snape talking about defensive spells in class when moody is defense teacher. |
| geekymom chapter 35 . 5/3 Terrific chapter! |
| Brockster550 chapter 35 . 5/2 I doubt Ron will truly accept Harry and Hermione's relationship. He has to have some kind of hidden motive. |
| geekymom chapter 34 . 4/27 Fantastic chapter! |
| UnknownVoid25 chapter 34 . 4/27 Hey I actually read ur stories from Wattpad under the same user name and I wanna say I love reading this story so much. Fluffy, cute, and full of romance with solid pacing! I love ur stories so continue to keep up the good work! |
| Brockster550 chapter 34 . 4/27 That was embarrassing for Ginny to walk in on Harry and Hermione making love to each other in the shower. Ron must be planning some kind of cunning scheme to make sure he gets Hermione before clobbering Dean. |
| Brockster550 chapter 33 . 4/21 That's Ron, always living in jealousy and claiming Hermione is his. Fred and George betting on when Harry and Hermione's relationship would become public was something they'd do. |
| teachergirl chapter 13 . 4/21 I thought you said they were going to have to fight the dragon. This is lame. It's the exact same thing as the book. Boring! |
