William Stark son of Rickard Stark sounds interesting, I rarely hear a story about a brother of Ned Stark on fanfiction.

Great chapter on the dragon and the wolf,so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please

what, i thought Bolton was with Jaime...

Question, will any of the Vale Lords turn? Knowing that Stannis and Robb back Aegon could convince some of the Vale Lords to turn against Lysa, especially when she was blaming the Lannisters for Jon Arryn’s death and now she is allying with them. I think it would be a good twist.

Seriously, how can you make a game of thrones story without Aegon have at least one damn dragon and add the white walkers

Thank you for the chapter.
Seems a little strange that the Golden Company is this incompetent. In canon they seemed tougher than this.
They arrived with 30.000 men. The entire Lannister army was 60.000 and they have been defeated twice. It doesn't seem plausible that the Company would just disintegrate. Yes, they are sell-swords, but that hardly means bad soldiers. On the contrary, all they know is fighting. They are well-equipped, experienced and all veterans. The Lannister army is made up of peasant levies. The Lannisters really shouldn't have been this successful.
For the Vale lords to support the Lannisters over the Starks, Tullys and now the Baratheons seems incredible. It's one thing for crazy Lady Arryn to command so, but for the lords of the Vale to blindly follow, even if they take their loyalty to House Arryn very seriously, seems somewhat unbelievable.
Looking forward to what happens next. Hope Aegon crushes the resistance at Kingslanding.
Also, there is no way, Tyrion, even if he is Jaime's brother, should be made Lord Lannister after the war is over. That is a huge reward and nothing a man who's faithful to the enemy should be given. If Jaime wants to be dismissed from the Kingsguard, I suppose he could be given the title, but that doesn't seem likely. Interesting to find out what's to be done then.
Also, Aegon needs to improve upon the power of the Crown or another rebellion might happen during the reign of his descendants.

Great chapter on the dragon and wolf,so can please put up next chapter to the story please

Aegon is not going to like this setback.

Interesting

Nice chapter

Loving this story! I'm uncertain why Aegon has to marry Sansa to join armies when he already proved himself worthy by fighting for them. This proposal in a way undermines that, in my opinion anyway. I was also hoping for them to grow in a relationship/ love before any betrothal. But overall the story/plot is good!

I hope Theon doesn’t betray Aegon and warns them of his father’s plans. That would be pretty unique as far as fanfics go about game of thrones

Stannis besieging Higharden, it's all coming full circle now and he'll finally have his revenge. Also I wonder how the Ironborn invasion will go since it was Theon's plan to take Winterfell originally, or if they'll just take other astles/towns/villages like Balon intends. Also the Valeman entering the fray could be a gamechanger and make life a lot harder for Aegon if they took to the field. If Tywin has 1/4 even of the Reachmen, his new 'Oxcross' host in the West and the Valemen to reinforce him Aegon will have to be a lot more cautious

Really interesting so far. I'm not sure that Stannis would have bent so easily myself but it's your story and I can suspend my disbelief for a really good premise. Curious to see how the Reach is handled, if Tarly leads a revolt then I look forward to see which of the Houses follows him or stays loyal to the Tyrell's.

I'd normally review after I've read the entirety of the story, but you mentioning me and the Golden Dragon in the last part encouraged me to put a quick note in now, publicly. This doesn't seem close enough to my story to warrant many comparisons and if anybody says that it is then I'd argue that they need to reread them both. I'm really intrigued by the thought of Jaime helping a Targaryen overthrow his own family, and he's generally a more fun personality than Jon Connington, my Lucerys' main advisor so that should be a fun dynamic to write. You also seem to be rushing towards Westeros which is a refreshing thing in my eyes, and focusing on a completely different part of the land. All in all I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm really looking forward to reading more.