Reviews for The Chosen One's Wrath
Ruthlesssceptile6 chapter 21 . 8/31
I understand, we all are humans and we need time. hopefully soon you'll find your passion for your story and once again update it, and when are you posting the football fic is it going to be like verifiedbreez's love&basketball and if you haven't read that story i say you should read it its a very nice fic. and maybe you can get some ideas.
Ruthlesssceptile6 sining outtt!
Advance shipper chapter 21 . 8/28
It's ok just take your time when u feel ready to continue writing this story again I definitely look forward to reading it I do miss reading the story it has been a long time since I last read this story and I definitely enjoy it definitely one of the best advance shipping stories I read if u want my opinion how about making some one shot advance shipping stories lately I noticed there's been barely any advance shipping stories being made by doing one or two shots they won't take long to do since there only one or two chapters instead of like ten or 15 chapters
ThePhantomKingZacian chapter 21 . 8/29
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH I KNOW YOU MIGHT NEED A BREAK BUT mY G0D ITS SO GOOD AAAAAÀAAAAAAAAAAA YOU SIR ARE AN AMAZING WRITER OH MY GOD YEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

ok sorry I just had to get that out

U H H... anyone up for a good monotype trainer fanfic? Might wanna look at my page...
(Sorry I'm new and no one pays attention to me :[ )

Good story btw
Don't know if I made that clear lol
jacob.rockhill613 chapter 21 . 8/29
well, I'm not going to look at the reviews, this is my slightly bias opinion, take this break try to enjoy it, collage is tough enough without the pressures of writing for an audience, this is a fantastic story and I know that waiting will kill me, but i'd much rather wait then see this story become confirmed dead. have a good one!
simpledude chapter 21 . 8/28
I rearely review about a fic, but here goes nothing.
Not gonna lie, I'm a little sad about this break, I've been following this fic for a while, you did a really amazing work with this, the plot, the characters description, your writing style, every single single detail is fantastic. So I really hope your passion again, though it's understandable, we've all been there at some point in any aspect.
All in all, I'll wait as long as I've to for this fic to continue, no worries!

Now that being said, I'm thrilled about your next fic! Football is one of my passions too, and a High School fanfiction would be something refreshing. Also let this be another Advanceshipping story! You've done an amazing job with this pair, I'm looking forward more from this, nowadays fics including this ship are rare, don't let this ship die! haha. I'm pretty sure you can do an incredible High School/ Romance/ Football fic out of this pair.

Anyways, wish you the best with everything you do!
lucienhalf58 chapter 21 . 8/28
As much as I wanted to see what happened next with Ash's encounter with his mother but from a stand point, it's understandable with your announcement to go on hiatus from this story to focus on other things or a new story it don't matter but just know you have my moral support and their's no need to rush, take as long as you need to.

However I would be interested in a High School Pokémon fic with a dash of Advanceshipping and other ships.
Greninjaten99 chapter 21 . 8/28
I am ok with you taking a break of this story, you said it will be awhile before you get back to working on this and that is fine, do what you want to do
Guest chapter 20 . 8/24
Please update
Guest chapter 20 . 8/23
Please update
Yanks1678 chapter 20 . 8/17
Plz update
Trygve11 chapter 20 . 7/24
Really good, nothing too much of note other than an idiot could even tell Delilah was lying, Oak or Drew I suspect could be a a red herring. I don’t think each of them would have info I think one of them could be a plant like Drew may know the people that saw Ash die “of a natural disaster” but may not be able to confirm if they murdered him. Can’t wait to see what Ms. Ketchem reveals.
Gerni chapter 20 . 7/21
NOOOO more plz this is an awesome story I cannot wait for chapater 21 also does delveon fight one of the traitors I want max to get knocked down a heck of alot of pegs by ash cause I hate max even before this fanfiction I was happy when max wasnt there the series was much better without him
Liz chapter 15 . 7/21
Da music da chant the way h wrote it was orefect it was all hype and the battle awsome the chant is now stuck in my head
Liz chapter 19 . 7/21
The way I did all of the chapatrrs is awsome ash or ghost is still caring but is much cautious while being like the strongest person is the world and delveon is awsome and I would like to know how it evoles
Temporal King chapter 20 . 7/20
DAMN IT! You just had to leave it at that cliffhanger didn't you? I was glued to the very edge of my nonexistent chair the entire time and Ash's talks with Oak and Delia was intense and full of surprise's, Oak is deffiantely suspicious.

Personally, I think Delia was blackmailed or threatened while Oak was willingly involved in some way, note that she didn't want to to give info on Ash's friends but that's possibly due to her not wanting to believe that Ash's friends were involved, it would break her more than what she is. Her behavior hasn't raised any red flags.

Maybe her life was threatened after Ash was 'killed' and the traitors wanted to give her a warning, talk in any way and they'll kill her to which would explain her choice of words and behavior.

Oak however was very suspicious, activating 2 security devices right before Ghost left? Deffiantely raised a read flag, he is hiding something beyond a shadow of a doubt and I believe he was willingly involved. Why though is the question.

But man I had the biggest grin on my face when Ash baited the old man, I love it when plans like those are used, it's so satisfying.

Awesome chapter, I just can't get over the bloody cliffhanger which is killing me right now. So I can't wait for the next one, don't keep us waiting too long :)

Hope your staying safe out there.
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