Wow! Very impressed! I think you do a very fantastic job with your writing! It feels very accurate, there are some terms that I don’t get (but don’t car to google, and just roll with) hey the story is still enjoyable! Thanks, and am looking forward to an update!

AHH! This story is so good!

This story is so excellent and I have such high hopes you will update often! Can’t wait to read the whole story! Loved how the Nick scene was very Marvel-esc in the way he interacts with his friends.

Oof I’ve been reading since the first chapter and hadn’t commented yet but this is really really good and I’m excited for the next update. It’s really interesting to see her working through things.

Let me just preface this by saying that I am a MAJOR fan of your Heta series because of how well you created Michelle. Needless to say, the years since has drastically improved your writing and technique. I love Edith and her relationships with other characters, most especially of those concerning her father and her fellow dancers. Furthermore, I feel like your opening chapter wasn’t bogged down by exposition—the pacing was slow, but it needed to be.

Anyway, I don’t know much about the Marvel universe, but I really want to know more about dear Edith and how she’ll cope with future events.

Great job and have a wonderful day!

PS Is this the same Edith from the time Michelle was teaching back in your A Matter of Series...or is that just a coincidence?