| Reviews for Bear the Weight |
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Syryn17 chapter 33 . 8/13 This story is great. I am excited to see where you take this story next! Thank you for sharing it! |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/31 Please please please, consider writing something again. Your story is fantastic and you were at least still alive around 2018 acoring to some of the stories you follow. |
RamenKnight chapter 32 . 6/8 Enjoyable story. Thanks for making. |
RamenKnight chapter 1 . 6/6 Gone done and made my eyes tear up. Hows that a way to greet a reader? |
rose.chan27 chapter 32 . 6/2 I cannot wait for more! Keep up the fantastic work! |
rose.chan27 chapter 26 . 6/1 Still loving this! |
rose.chan27 chapter 11 . 6/1 Still loving it. :) |
rose.chan27 chapter 7 . 5/31 I love it. |
Guest chapter 32 . 5/20 Pwease, pwease, pwease update soon! |
jen.xtt chapter 32 . 5/16 oh my goodness! such a lovely chapter and then you leave us hanging at the end! ahhhhhhhhh! the suspense! well done, I've just realised how long this story actually is and how far we've come since the beginning, this is what I love about fanfics! your writing leaves me hanging all the time, waiting to find out more! absolutely fantastic work |
ddwm91 chapter 32 . 5/16 I liked the chapter, but I am slightly confused as to who is who in the last segment. Monkey is Asuma SARUtobi? Sparrow with the Senbon is Genma? Rabbit is Hayate? Lizard is Iwashi and RaidÅ is Panda? Who is Cat? Is Deer a Nara, because of course it is? The suspense is figuratively killing me. Looking forward to what comes next! Much love! |
555 chapter 32 . 5/15 Great chapter! Excited for the future! |
Im Not Itachi chapter 3 . 5/15 Hey, seven year old! You wanna fuck around in my head? I know you're almost completely untrained in a discipline that could make me a drooling vegetable, but you've figured out I'm a reincarnation despite having zero real context. You even figured out a purple clothed two-dimensional blonde cartoon was you, which is impressive because you neither wear purple yet, nor do you have particularly long hair. Most impressive. People view me a prodigy because of my early reading comprehension, but you've got more personal insight than your father! Some interrogator, right? Can't even tell I've died before. What a pleb he is. |
firemaster101 chapter 32 . 5/15 Well damn I didn't except them to capture . |
Nelle-ct chapter 31 . 5/13 This really was a fun chapter! The highlight of this chapter for me was probably Rock Lee just being Rock Lee lol. One thing that's bothering me though, is how it was mentioned a few chapters ago that Ino was going into the Intelligence division rather than the Medical Division. But she's such a key-player during the Fourth Shinobi War (from sealing the Kinkaku and Ginkaku, saving Choji from Asuma, possessing the Juubi twice, contacting all of the shinobi on the battlefield to erect Mud-Wall Barriers, contacting them all again and transmitting Naruto's emotions...) that it seems weird to me that Miho, Choji, and especially Shikamaru are letting her do it. At least, without any confrontation from the later two. Even if she never told them outright, Shikamaru at least would've figured it out. (I think) It was mentioned in the beginning of this story that he was the only one that could properly chastise Ino. Even though Ino as she is now would likely not let them stop her, I feel like it's an important thing to be said? I don't know maybe that's just me and my Ino-biased self talking lol. (Not that I'm complaining or anything, I swear, you probably have your own plans and I respect that!) Thank you for this amazing chapter! |