Ooo, girl, Champagne is mad. But I would highly recommend not using the G word anymore. It’s a slur. I’m not a G word but I say get rid of it before something happens to this amazing story. I’m excited for the next update!

Great first chapter.

Please don’t use the word gypsy nor stereotype your character the way you are. It is very offensive to my people. Gypsy is a slur word and the way your portraying your character is so offensive. Imagine portraying another ethnic person and calling them a word that’s been used against them for centuries and stereotyping them. It’s not nice. Thank you.