Wew, such a splendid tale with an unusual take on the crew and their captain. I'm loving what I'm reading, hope it's still ongoing!

Such a good story! Hope it is continued!

Also, how strong is Luffy at this point? He can use Haki,as well as up to G3 and he has been trained for around 9-8 yrs (depending on when he started) and by Akainu himself. So, is he somewhere in between post and pre TS, or is he slightly stronger but hasn’t developed G4 yet?

Love the fic, love you, please continue, don’t let this amazing piece of work die.

I hooe your next chapter is close to being completed. I love this story. Would hate to see it end now.

When's the next chapter? This is awesome

I continue to check and hope for an update. This really is one of the best fics in the fandom.

I love dark but believable this luffy is, and how nicely you've portrayed the story as whole, can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story

I wish you could update this story. It's so great！

Just found the story, I liked it, did you stop writing?

About Luffy wishing he could have done more to spare Usopp the pain of having to take a life... I don't want to be THAT guy, but Luffy could have ended that battle with a thought, lol. But I understand, that would be boring.

I really appreciate how you turned Buggy into a training dummy. Zoro should just turn his sword around and hit him with the dull sides.

It would have been interesting if you made Luffy a member of "Sword" working under Sengoku to eliminate ALL corruption in the Easy Blue, and then the Grand Line... Make him openly revolt, like Drake, but working with Sengoku to crush dirty Marines as a fake Pirate?

Hope to see more soon!