I like where this is going.

And suddenly Alarielle appears.

Have been kind of on the fence since for some reason you brought the main characters 'friend' in to it, so will be interesting to see where you go from here.

Another great chapter, I really like the idea of Morathi enjoying the differences she’s finding between this world and her own. I also liked that Eric didn’t immediately respond to her advances in spite of it seeming like he had wanted to. I’m very excited to find out who the new blonde woman is and to see later on how far Eric and Morathi’s relationship will develop.

¿Moriathi is just fall in love to Eric?

The things is getting complicated, even more with this misterios blonde character at the end.

bro your the best!

Morathi is a cool girl! I like her.

I wonder who the blondie at the end is, probably some high elf :D

Oh my, the plot thickens!

Good to know that Morathi stayed because she chose to continue her "vacation" on earth. She has gone missing, had comas, isolated herself, etc, for decades before. So there shouldn't be any catastrophic effects back home for her to stay around in Canada for a while. Not that she would probably care...

The last section though, who has joined the party? Someone who appears to know who Morathi is. So another person from the Warhammer world? The blonde hair, and adjusting hat around ears makes me think it might be a high elf who has found their way here. But I am not sure how that would happen, unless Morathi showed up as some sort of beacon for them to follow when she did her little ritual fun. Maybe another person who knows about Warhammer in Canada?

That reminds me, the thing I am most anticipating, when Morathi asks Eric how he knows about her. Finding out that she is a fictional character in this world will be quite the shocker I am sure. Can't wait to see that, especially if it is because this blonde woman was someone from earth who recognized her and breaks the news to her. Eric will have quite the interesting time trying to explain in that situation.

Once more, I really liked the chapter, especially the romantic bits, and eagerly await the next one!

Cool chapter! I mean a great description how they thing about Morathi when she wasn't fully clohted. You captioned this very well.

Very Good!

Keep up the good work.

Thanks, a thousand Thanks, today is my Birthday and your newest Chapter was an unexpected present.

damn rolled a one of a metaphysical d20.

damn i just want romance

That was amazing, loved the display of power of Morathi blasting demons. That would stretch the minds of anyone, never mind two pretty normal Canadians. But the at the ending, what the fuck just happened? Did she try to teleport out and just ended up back in his bathroom? Is she stuck here now? That's not good for the future of mankind. Not even considering her physical power, she can mind control just about anyone.

Anyway, I can't wait until the next chapter when we get some answers. Thank you for the read!

That went well, all things considered.