Brilliant chapter! Lots of emotion at the end, I’m glad Charlotte got her fears out, it had been building for a while

Personally I quite like the lengths of the chapters, it’s not massively long and it gives you chance to actually get into the story and it being satisfying rather than being cut off too short

What a cool ending to Midnight! out of all these fanfictions thats the first time I've seen that ending. This is one of my favorite episodes so I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!

OH! Doc knows Char? Interesting~
And sad that he's ignoring her... bad Doc...
You're putting the characters well, not changing and keeping their personalities, love it 3

Oh my! Having a good life, finding love and suddenly BUM... you disappear... poor family, I can't imagine what they felt...

Let's go to the next!

THAT WAS SO UNEXPECTED! I LOVE IT!

Omg! Whats the poor doctor going to react like when he realizes that she just went out the door?!
Can't wait for you to update again

oo can you have her jump to 13? I think that would be awesome.

Omg what a cliffhanger! More chaps asap please

Poor Charlotte doesn't get to stay for Christmas dinner before being whisked away to another Doctor, she is not going to be happy where ever she ends up. Looking forward to more.

I love it and that was a really quick update. Update ASAP please

Interesting first chapter, I don't think I've read a story where the oc was getting married before being transported to the Doctor who world. Looking forward to more.