Very interesting. Wish there was more here.

you annoy me a bit because you didn't use real Japanese for some words and instead used slang like "happy" instead of ureshi for happy and "hando" instead of te for hand!
If you use google translate you should check for other translation instead of using the first one that comes up because the way you treat Japanese it's like it was created based on English which is just stupid!

Dope as always FTDS

please update

pls continue your story sir and i like some of your stories too

I hope this story continues.

interesting

Continue with the story? It is very interesting, do not give up

You know i feel offended by prolong of this story
U have no right to offend and judge islam & prophet of islam
U on took quran 9:5 verse & twisted it to your own logic u should first read full surah than try commenting on it

buena combinacion para los poderes de naruto, poderoso pero con limites espero que continues esta historia esta entretenida.

look I read the prologue, I know that your writing a story but deep inside I can't help but feel offended, if you hadn't guessed I am muslim, I'm not insulting you or anything but it hurts man. ignoring that nice chapter overall considering...you know...the religion confrontation moment.

Hope you consider coming back to this story. Really good.

I want to see the next chapter of this amazing story

Another good story. Please update. Don't even know what to say that I haven't said before. Awesome books. Gonna keep reading them into the night. Good job.

i see what you did now. you gave him powers similar to Pride from seven deadly sins. Naruto's power rises and falls with the sun. if you gave xenovia something similar with the moon they would balance each other out, just an idea.
anyways great work on the chapter and i cant wait to see the next.