Wow. This is great. It was unexpectedly deep, with wonderful depth of character for both Gene and Sour Bill. Well done.

I'm a fan of Sour Bill being more perceptive than he lets on, so it was fun to see that here.

Gene's a good mixture of uptight and insecure. You handle him vividly.

Although I really hate Gene, I love Sour Bill and this story was great.

Aww, I really enjoyed this! I didn't see the asking Turbo out on a date coming, but haha I could totally see it happening. Now I'm just curious if Bill had any dark/embarrassing secret to tell Gene in return...