| Reviews for Altered Fate |
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SlyChoice chapter 3 . 3/22 Just like so many of these story’s that are good. Unfinished and abandoned. |
AJ Granger chapter 3 . 6/20/2019 Not much of a ruler if she wants to be loved and her lack of feeling love from the people she came to conquer (who didn't ask her to come there) is something that makes her long to kill them all. I appreciate the changes, but Dany's descent started before this episode. I'm glad that Jon was able to listen to Bran's advice and that Daenerys listened to him. Honestly, if Jon were ruling or co-ruling with her then the North would not need to stay separate or likely feel the need to do so. Sansa didn't need to insist on a separate North with the Three-Eyed Raven ruling either since they were calling him Bran and he's a Northerner who outranks her as ruler of Winterfell. Another dumb thing to overlook by the writers with trying to end the show. Bran died in the cave or so we were told by the Three-Eyed Raven who also told Sansa and everyone else that would listen that he could not be the Stark in Winterfell or the Warden of the North because he wasn't Bran anymore. |
victoria.terreros chapter 2 . 6/20/2019 I like it very much! It's so hard for Jon, Tyrion and Danny...Maybe they will suffer a little but I guess you are doing justice and save these characters from the sad ending, both Jon and Danny deserve love, not without tears, not without losing beloved ones...but they deserve it! Thank you for your writing! |
Faith O chapter 2 . 6/17/2019 I really like this one! |
OBSERVER01 nli chapter 2 . 6/14/2019 Nice chapter. Keep up the good work, |
OBSERVER01 nli chapter 1 . 6/14/2019 Nice start. |
ashley.crowley.10 chapter 2 . 6/15/2019 Ok so this is how it should’ve started out in the show but freaking Jon |
redlox2 chapter 2 . 6/15/2019 I was so waiting for this and this didn’t disappoint! I like how Dany is still her season 8 self but with Jon AND Tyrion on her side she can be reasoned with. (They rejecting her was part of the problem). Will there be like a Jon POV where he explains to Sansa or will the next part be the battle? |
redlox2 chapter 1 . 6/7/2019 I am super enjoying this! Please tell me this isn’t an one shot! |